God's Holiday
A sacred day.31 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Christmas is such a magical time of year. Mainly because it's a celebration of the birth of our Lord and Savior. But it is also a time to be near family and friends. Your poem flowed smoothly and was a joy to read.
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Christmas is such a magical time of year. Mainly because it's a celebration of the birth of our Lord and Savior. But it is also a time to be near family and friends. Your poem flowed smoothly and was a joy to read.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from harmony13
This author created a lovely Christmas poem. The words are uplifting,
descriptive and creative. The read was delightful. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great Christmas! Maria
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This author created a lovely Christmas poem. The words are uplifting,
descriptive and creative. The read was delightful. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great Christmas! Maria
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from EeanBlack
More people commit suicide over the Christmas holiday than any other time. Many people have never had a present in their lives, much less a moment under that blessed mistletoe. I'm glad to see you have precious memories. The line and activity I like most is romantic sleigh rides under the moon. I must disagree on one thing, and it isn't in this nice poem. I DON'T feel that a poem should rhyme. I personally feel that writing something that doesn't rhyme is much harder to do than rhyming. Shakespeare was a poet. Good work.
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More people commit suicide over the Christmas holiday than any other time. Many people have never had a present in their lives, much less a moment under that blessed mistletoe. I'm glad to see you have precious memories. The line and activity I like most is romantic sleigh rides under the moon. I must disagree on one thing, and it isn't in this nice poem. I DON'T feel that a poem should rhyme. I personally feel that writing something that doesn't rhyme is much harder to do than rhyming. Shakespeare was a poet. Good work.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Merry Christmas, my friend! This is such a beautiful poem on the Christ of Christmas and the gift He brings to all. The art is lovely too. We don't decorate as much anymore, but we have a fresh Christmas with decades of ornaments. My oldest ornament is from 1940.
Sending you my very best and blessings for Christmas!
Sally xoxo
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Merry Christmas, my friend! This is such a beautiful poem on the Christ of Christmas and the gift He brings to all. The art is lovely too. We don't decorate as much anymore, but we have a fresh Christmas with decades of ornaments. My oldest ornament is from 1940.
Sending you my very best and blessings for Christmas!
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Willie,
This is a great upbeat poem. Its rhyme scheme is perfect. I love the way it flows from beginning to end.
I don't know if you know anything about AI, but you might try there to put music to it. I know of other poets that do that.
One small error:
(Shares) are open reflecting (ting) the snow,-(Shades) (in)
Great job
Cecilia
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Willie,
This is a great upbeat poem. Its rhyme scheme is perfect. I love the way it flows from beginning to end.
I don't know if you know anything about AI, but you might try there to put music to it. I know of other poets that do that.
One small error:
(Shares) are open reflecting (ting) the snow,-(Shades) (in)
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I can't think of a tune, but hope someone has a good idea.
-A festive opening verse sets the holiday mood.
-Many activities go on before the holiday arrives.
-I like how you bring in Grandma and Grandpa
and a little romance with "sleigh rides under the moon."
-A very good closing couplet.
-I enjoyed your Christmas poem. Have a very one
and Happy New Year, too!
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I can't think of a tune, but hope someone has a good idea.
-A festive opening verse sets the holiday mood.
-Many activities go on before the holiday arrives.
-I like how you bring in Grandma and Grandpa
and a little romance with "sleigh rides under the moon."
-A very good closing couplet.
-I enjoyed your Christmas poem. Have a very one
and Happy New Year, too!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
The imagery and thoughts written within your words are beautiful and warm for the season, reminding us that we would not share any of this if it were not for the Love of our Lord.
One confusing line....
Shares are open reflecting ting the snow,
Sniles, Carol
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The imagery and thoughts written within your words are beautiful and warm for the season, reminding us that we would not share any of this if it were not for the Love of our Lord.
One confusing line....
Shares are open reflecting ting the snow,
Sniles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from jaded831
You created the magic of the Christmas season. I wish the experience described in your poem could be for everyone. Your poem generates love, and the world is full of hate. Your poem should be the blueprint of how people should behave. God would be proud.
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You created the magic of the Christmas season. I wish the experience described in your poem could be for everyone. Your poem generates love, and the world is full of hate. Your poem should be the blueprint of how people should behave. God would be proud.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice Christmas poem. Good work.
Here a couple words I didn't get.
Shares are open reflecting ting the snow, - I don't understand 'shares'. Or 'ting'.
Best wishes.
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Very nice Christmas poem. Good work.
Here a couple words I didn't get.
Shares are open reflecting ting the snow, - I don't understand 'shares'. Or 'ting'.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
Comment from Beejay
A lovely old fashioned kind of poem that is so right for this time of year. Fantastic presentation, everything complements, from the choice colour to the type of font used.
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A lovely old fashioned kind of poem that is so right for this time of year. Fantastic presentation, everything complements, from the choice colour to the type of font used.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
