In valleys of despair
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Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful poem, Roy, and one with which all believers can identify. The Christian life is not an easy one, we don't fit in with the world, and yet we are asked to be in the world, shining His light and representing Him to unbelievers, who often scorn our faith. We all have experiences of deep dark valleys as well as the mountain top ones. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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A beautiful poem, Roy, and one with which all believers can identify. The Christian life is not an easy one, we don't fit in with the world, and yet we are asked to be in the world, shining His light and representing Him to unbelievers, who often scorn our faith. We all have experiences of deep dark valleys as well as the mountain top ones. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thanks Wendy, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Roy,
What a lovely poem this is. Everyone of them that you write has that Midas touch. They all turn to gold. Like i've said before you have been very Blessed when you pick up that pen an write.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Roy,
What a lovely poem this is. Everyone of them that you write has that Midas touch. They all turn to gold. Like i've said before you have been very Blessed when you pick up that pen an write.
Cecilia
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thanks Cecilia, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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Your welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Carol Clark2
Yes, it is often in the valleys that we learn the most. I like the way you used the repeating line in this Quatern. It fits well in each stanza, and your rhymes are well done. I like the line about turning toward hope's source. Good poem! Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Yes, it is often in the valleys that we learn the most. I like the way you used the repeating line in this Quatern. It fits well in each stanza, and your rhymes are well done. I like the line about turning toward hope's source. Good poem! Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thanks Carol, for these sage comments and review, blessings Roy
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It looks like I was a bit behind in reading your writing. Sorry I can't keep up with the reviewing.
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Don't apologise, you are faithful and appreciated.
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Thank you! I appreciate that.
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well done
Comment from Neonewman
Beautifully crafted, Roy. Thank you, god, for Jesus--God's love for us in infinite. I pray that all who live find his love.
God bless, my friend.
Steve
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Beautifully crafted, Roy. Thank you, god, for Jesus--God's love for us in infinite. I pray that all who live find his love.
God bless, my friend.
Steve
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thanks Steve for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy