Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Oh dear, what a mess! Matthew is in for big trouble, what have they got planned for him? We know this has been orchestrated by Doyle, so really, Matthew doesn't stand much of a chance. And what about Jenna? Will she tell Garth the truth? She mustn't keep this to herself. Rape and a baby... No, she must tell him. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Well done, my frined. :)) Sandra xxx

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Good morning, Sandra... I'm in the process of writing at the moment and Matthew has really got himself in deep this time... And Doyle is loving every minute of it and still is planning more. Can't wait till you let me know what you think in the next chapter.... Hang on!
Smiles, Carol

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 06-Nov-2024

I think you could post two a day seeing as you only had to write 10,000 words. This is excellent! xxx

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

I've already wrote 12,767 and we've only skimmed the surface of the story. I get 17 reviews... but I might lose some if I post more.... and I've been giving more $$ to appear near the top to gain readers, but I don't think that will matter at this point. Either you are reading or not. Those who are in the contest say they are already overloaded.... I don't care about the contest.... I just want to write and know that people are enjoying it.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 06-Nov-2024

Well, you have one here who is thoroughly enjoying it. When will Eleanor come to Jenna's aid? She's the best!!

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Eleanor's about to be torn in several directions and Doyle will be enjoying his revenge. be prepared! And thank you as always!