Willing Hearts
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Comment from lancellot
This is a well written chapter and we good a really clear view of how far the relationship between your two leads has progressed. The conversation is sweet and very female friendly, as Noah defers to Sami's feelings and wants easily and kindly, with gentle compromise and understand. The perfect gentleman.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This is a well written chapter and we good a really clear view of how far the relationship between your two leads has progressed. The conversation is sweet and very female friendly, as Noah defers to Sami's feelings and wants easily and kindly, with gentle compromise and understand. The perfect gentleman.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I am enjoying the openness of their relationship now. Sami loves him and she isn't trying to hide it, but she understands that Noah has to remain professional. This is getting more and more interesting. But I have that feeling that the other shoe is about to drop. Gretchen
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I am enjoying the openness of their relationship now. Sami loves him and she isn't trying to hide it, but she understands that Noah has to remain professional. This is getting more and more interesting. But I have that feeling that the other shoe is about to drop. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Yes, the shoe is about to drop. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
I love that the growing relationship between Sami and Noah is out in the open and a matter of speculation and conversation. Sami's open affection for Noah is very refreshing, wholesome and encouraging. I love it. I love that she openly displayed it for Mateo to see and digest, even though he continues to flirt with her.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I love that the growing relationship between Sami and Noah is out in the open and a matter of speculation and conversation. Sami's open affection for Noah is very refreshing, wholesome and encouraging. I love it. I love that she openly displayed it for Mateo to see and digest, even though he continues to flirt with her.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Mateo will never give up. LOL Thank you for the kind review. Sending hugs and prayers.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, as always, this was a great chapter. The dialogue is crisp and to the point . But what is more. I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi Barbara, as always, this was a great chapter. The dialogue is crisp and to the point . But what is more. I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Yes, bad things are about to happen. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
At a point where the bonds are quickly getting thicker, I'm guessing that something big is about to happen. But with me, I'm just the type who is always anticipating something. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
"That would be (a) problem, wouldn't it?"
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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At a point where the bonds are quickly getting thicker, I'm guessing that something big is about to happen. But with me, I'm just the type who is always anticipating something. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
"That would be (a) problem, wouldn't it?"
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I've made the correction. Yes, something big is about to happen. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
(Your) English is excellent.
Sami is showing her strong character and I like this. She's been locked up for too long and she's bound to be frustrated by all the machismo going on. Great ending. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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(Your) English is excellent.
Sami is showing her strong character and I like this. She's been locked up for too long and she's bound to be frustrated by all the machismo going on. Great ending. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
Terrific exchange between Sami and Noah...
And if the picture indicates what he looks like, Garth might have a run for the money. LOL
I enjoyed this chapter, as always. I especially liked Sami letting her friend know where things stand. It was a good one for her!
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Terrific exchange between Sami and Noah...
And if the picture indicates what he looks like, Garth might have a run for the money. LOL
I enjoyed this chapter, as always. I especially liked Sami letting her friend know where things stand. It was a good one for her!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from patcelaw
This chapter is very well constructed. It was a pleasure to listen to. It moves along very well because your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation are so very well done. I wish you the very best with writing your book. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This chapter is very well constructed. It was a pleasure to listen to. It moves along very well because your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation are so very well done. I wish you the very best with writing your book. Patricia.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.