Dreams of Running
My future awaits51 total reviews
Comment from aryr
This was fantastic, Jesse. It had a wonderful rhyme and expressed something you have always dreamed of 'running'. But first you have to walk before running, it is much easier that way, lol. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings.
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This was fantastic, Jesse. It had a wonderful rhyme and expressed something you have always dreamed of 'running'. But first you have to walk before running, it is much easier that way, lol. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
Comment from June Sargent
As someone scheduled for her second hip replacement in four days, I hear you. Never thought I would become a bionic woman with two titanium joints. But if I can move without pain again, let's go for it! Meanwhile, I can dream...thanks for sharing your thoughts and dream.
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As someone scheduled for her second hip replacement in four days, I hear you. Never thought I would become a bionic woman with two titanium joints. But if I can move without pain again, let's go for it! Meanwhile, I can dream...thanks for sharing your thoughts and dream.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Run, my friend, in your dreams that are destined to be realities. Run as fast and far as you can, and I will weep as I watch you. Hope you had a wonderful holiday.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Run, my friend, in your dreams that are destined to be realities. Run as fast and far as you can, and I will weep as I watch you. Hope you had a wonderful holiday.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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You can stop weeping because I am feeling less pain and going for it with walking.
I will run as far and as fast as I can and be pain-free as I go.
I enjoyed the holiday and am looking forward to the upcoming ones.
I hope you have a great holiday season as well.
Jesse
Comment from Terry Broxson
A poem with a dream and a poem with a goal. It is beautifully written with a good flow from thought to thought. I so do hope this poem become reality, and I look forward to a rewrite of the experience. Terry.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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A poem with a dream and a poem with a goal. It is beautifully written with a good flow from thought to thought. I so do hope this poem become reality, and I look forward to a rewrite of the experience. Terry.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Hello Terry.
I will post as I go along with my progress of walking and then running. I hope to get as far as I can by walking and then running.
My dreams will become my realities.
Jesse
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Jesse
How wonderful to read that despite how difficult life might be, you still believe and dream of better tomorrow. I pray you never lose that dream and it comes true.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Good morning, Jesse
How wonderful to read that despite how difficult life might be, you still believe and dream of better tomorrow. I pray you never lose that dream and it comes true.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What a wonderful poem Jesse, tightly stitched with heartfelt passion and lovely colours painted throughout that brings the emotive heart of your words together brilliantly....Brings out the dream within wonderfully well
Mitchell
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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What a wonderful poem Jesse, tightly stitched with heartfelt passion and lovely colours painted throughout that brings the emotive heart of your words together brilliantly....Brings out the dream within wonderfully well
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I love this review! It has everything a poem or prose piece wants of a reader. I love the descriptive words to use and you end this carefully and well. I hope you also get the dreams you wish for just as I am wishing for my dreams to come into reality. Thanks for the beautiful review.
Mitchell, I loved this review so much that I will try to memorize it for posterity!
Have a happy holiday season!
Jesse
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I was flying along with you as I can really relate
to this as I have had similar dreams. They are so uplifting in more ways than one. Cheers. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. I was flying along with you as I can really relate
to this as I have had similar dreams. They are so uplifting in more ways than one. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the sentiments here Jesse and I can feel your positivity and this encouragement will help you gain inner strength.
I hope you you don't mind Jesse, but I was so pleased to read your lovely poem that I have some suggestions for the metre within? This will hopefully improve the flow. Here goes:
"As if flying without a sound"
suggest:
"As if I'm flying without sound"
"Carrying extra potent shields"
suggest:
"Carrying those potent shields"
"That guard(s) me as I run along". No (s)
"While singing a triumphant song"
suggest:
"Triumphantly I sing my song"
"I race to reach the finish line"
suggest:
"Racing to reach (each) finish line"
"Embracing this real dream as mine"
suggest:
"Embracing dreams, as they are mine"
Take care of yourself, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I adore the sentiments here Jesse and I can feel your positivity and this encouragement will help you gain inner strength.
I hope you you don't mind Jesse, but I was so pleased to read your lovely poem that I have some suggestions for the metre within? This will hopefully improve the flow. Here goes:
"As if flying without a sound"
suggest:
"As if I'm flying without sound"
"Carrying extra potent shields"
suggest:
"Carrying those potent shields"
"That guard(s) me as I run along". No (s)
"While singing a triumphant song"
suggest:
"Triumphantly I sing my song"
"I race to reach the finish line"
suggest:
"Racing to reach (each) finish line"
"Embracing this real dream as mine"
suggest:
"Embracing dreams, as they are mine"
Take care of yourself, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thanks, Dolly, for all the suggestions. I have moved on now to all the other pressing issues in my life.
I hope you have a lovely holiday season.
Jesse
Comment from karenina
"Perchance to dream..." Said Shakespeare!
Indeed, you have dreamed of this moment for so long and the ebullience of your poem is in each well considered line!
Long before surgery you were spying "illusive vivid dreams."
At times they seemed "elusive" as well, yet you did not falter nor lose your belief in yourself...
You are your super power Jesse!
I am beaming because you are soon to reach the finish line...and your sheer will combined with the skill of your surgeon and rehab are coming together to transform it to a brand new starting gate!
Triumphant poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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"Perchance to dream..." Said Shakespeare!
Indeed, you have dreamed of this moment for so long and the ebullience of your poem is in each well considered line!
Long before surgery you were spying "illusive vivid dreams."
At times they seemed "elusive" as well, yet you did not falter nor lose your belief in yourself...
You are your super power Jesse!
I am beaming because you are soon to reach the finish line...and your sheer will combined with the skill of your surgeon and rehab are coming together to transform it to a brand new starting gate!
Triumphant poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thanks, Karenina, for the extra star and this lovely review.
I have been waiting a long time as you say and I will be glad to succeed to the highest as I continue to walk and run when I am capable of running.
Thanks for your support and your kindness, my friend. I have been receiving all good reviews and it brings me up and gives me the lift I crave.
Have a wonderful Sunday!
Jesse
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I am sending my very best....always!
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing this dream, Jesse! May God strengthen your legs more and more each day and that you'll realize this dream. I love that you have this dream and we can dream with you!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thanks for sharing this dream, Jesse! May God strengthen your legs more and more each day and that you'll realize this dream. I love that you have this dream and we can dream with you!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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And dream with me for sure. I love the supportive review you have given me.
My friend, I will continue to dream of walking and running until I finally achieve my goals.
Have a happy holiday season!
Jesse
By the way, thank you for this splendid sixer.