Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, who rescued whom? You did a great job with your poignant free verse. Your words are smooth with great emotion revealed in all of them. I could picture you, your wife, and Hazard taking this stroll. Your words were descriptive and meaningful and straight from your heart. What a blessing your wife received and you and of course the little dog. Y'all are a great family.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Well, who rescued whom? You did a great job with your poignant free verse. Your words are smooth with great emotion revealed in all of them. I could picture you, your wife, and Hazard taking this stroll. Your words were descriptive and meaningful and straight from your heart. What a blessing your wife received and you and of course the little dog. Y'all are a great family.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Jan, thank you for all you do with us in FS!
Comment from tfawcus
What a wonderful way to have interpreted this picture. Moments such as this become etched in our hearts and can be more powerful healing elements than any medicine.
Some skilful use of poetic techniques in this free verse make it more than a prose account split into lines. A well thought out composition.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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What a wonderful way to have interpreted this picture. Moments such as this become etched in our hearts and can be more powerful healing elements than any medicine.
Some skilful use of poetic techniques in this free verse make it more than a prose account split into lines. A well thought out composition.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you kindly Tony, I appreciate the validation.
Comment from Yardier
Nicely done. Cancer is no ones friend and when it attacks our beloved, we weep. Then with God's blessing the battle is won. Tears once again flow with joy from the soul.
ALl the best, Yard.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Nicely done. Cancer is no ones friend and when it attacks our beloved, we weep. Then with God's blessing the battle is won. Tears once again flow with joy from the soul.
ALl the best, Yard.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your thoughts Yard.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
It's a lovely poem and tribute to your wife - so glad she's celebrating this fifth anniversary with you.
In the second paragraph, you use the word "that" at both the end of one line and then the beginning of the next line, so you might want to eliminate one of those.
Best wishes to you and your love.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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It's a lovely poem and tribute to your wife - so glad she's celebrating this fifth anniversary with you.
In the second paragraph, you use the word "that" at both the end of one line and then the beginning of the next line, so you might want to eliminate one of those.
Best wishes to you and your love.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Oops thank you for catching this for me.
Comment from Mia Twysted
It is wonderful that she is cancer free. My grandfather was not as lucky and succumb to cancer several years ago. The pieces quite and peaceful and somehow full of hope despite the pull at the heart when you learn of the "cancer treatments."
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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It is wonderful that she is cancer free. My grandfather was not as lucky and succumb to cancer several years ago. The pieces quite and peaceful and somehow full of hope despite the pull at the heart when you learn of the "cancer treatments."
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Mia, thanks
Comment from royowen
So many of my friends have been lost to cancer, so I'm so glad that God spared your wife Jim. The doubt of recovery and the final outcome is hard to imagine, but you must suffered also, this is a lovely write, I'm so happy you shared it, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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So many of my friends have been lost to cancer, so I'm so glad that God spared your wife Jim. The doubt of recovery and the final outcome is hard to imagine, but you must suffered also, this is a lovely write, I'm so happy you shared it, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you Roy, we are holy blessed for certain.
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Most welcome