Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, a greatj ob writing this poem about the swashbuckling teddybear, great picture, i wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thank you - glad you enjoyed the swash and the buckle!

Comment from Lincoln's Black Dog

Excellent

This is a beautifully lulling childrens poem. I'm not sure why you haven't changed the category to "children's poetry". I have no complaints. Rhyming couplets make the best conclusions and I'm glad you made use of this one. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Oops - just forgot to change that box - I will get to it.
Thanks for reviewing.

reply by Lincoln's Black Dog on 25-Sep-2011

any time :)

Comment from honeytree

Exceptional

I loved this special teddy

The words flowed so well in every way.

Our teddy bears are so important within the life of a child

cuddling up to the comfort, to what a teddy can give.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thank you - I agree with your thoughts.

reply by honeytree on 27-Sep-2011

Having a special teddy bear as a child was very special and had one for years.

Annie

reply by honeytree on 28-Sep-2011

I loved my teddy bear as a child.
I am glad you liked the review.

Honeytree

Comment from djsaxon

Excellent

Absolutely delightful. Great rhyme, great cadence, and heaps of fun! The empathy and love for the world of the child pervades the entire piece. Flawless.

Cheers - DJ

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thanks, DJ - glad you enjoyed my swashbuckling, furry friend.