Looking for Orion - 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Abby"Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was another lovely chapter in your wonderful book, Debs, dealing with children's anger at God. It was a good idea using the doll when Abby was trying to explain His reasons. I'm hoping at the end of this book Jack will be back with God. I don't honestly believe he left Him completely because you can't be angry at something you don't believe in. Now to find out what Abby wants to see Rachell for. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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That was another lovely chapter in your wonderful book, Debs, dealing with children's anger at God. It was a good idea using the doll when Abby was trying to explain His reasons. I'm hoping at the end of this book Jack will be back with God. I don't honestly believe he left Him completely because you can't be angry at something you don't believe in. Now to find out what Abby wants to see Rachell for. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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The next chapter is ready and just waiting on me to get enough reviewer cents to post. lol. I'm a SLOW reader!
Thank you for the encouraging review. Do you think this is making 'the point' well enough? There are so many people 'mad' at God for whatever reason. I want to reach their hearts, if possible. I don't want to short-change this part. Everything else is just setting this up. Please keep me on my toes with the spiritual parts. they have to be as tight as the action scenes and dialogue (or tighter). Not a hard job at all... lol
Blessings, my dear friend,
Deb