Hardship
An Acrostic- Loop Poem55 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello kahpot,
My your acrostic- Loop Poem 'Hardship'
deserves six stars of how well you describe the hardships are so true especially when Shadows that darken one's clarity of hope.
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello kahpot,
My your acrostic- Loop Poem 'Hardship'
deserves six stars of how well you describe the hardships are so true especially when Shadows that darken one's clarity of hope.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you so very my Friend, as always your wonderful comments and review are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Beautifully done, sir, and with words/phrasings that really bring the meaning home. Love that you made it loop within and beginning to end - GREAT JOB! ;) Thanx for sharing your talented pen! ;) Yvette
[Sorry still really far behind, but I'll get there.... I just know it!! At least I can see the messages number getting smaller and smaller - lol! ;)]
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Beautifully done, sir, and with words/phrasings that really bring the meaning home. Love that you made it loop within and beginning to end - GREAT JOB! ;) Thanx for sharing your talented pen! ;) Yvette
[Sorry still really far behind, but I'll get there.... I just know it!! At least I can see the messages number getting smaller and smaller - lol! ;)]
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello My Blondie Friend, I think like you I have been AWOL a bit too, being behind ain't so bad-I feel like that all the time but we gotta smile, your exceptional comments and review are as always much appreciated, stay well and stay safe****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
You have written a clever and creative poem. I admire your use of words especially beginning with the word "hardship" and ending with the same word. The combination of the acrostic and loop form flow smoothly and make your theme strong.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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You have written a clever and creative poem. I admire your use of words especially beginning with the word "hardship" and ending with the same word. The combination of the acrostic and loop form flow smoothly and make your theme strong.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from K Arlington Andrews
Really enjoyed this work. I can totally relate to the struggle and hardship you describe so eloquently. Bravo on expressing heartfelt issues in the confines of this writing structure. Thanks for sharing. All the Best, K
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Really enjoyed this work. I can totally relate to the struggle and hardship you describe so eloquently. Bravo on expressing heartfelt issues in the confines of this writing structure. Thanks for sharing. All the Best, K
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you K, it was a fun challenge, your comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It is very nicely looped the thoughts about cause and effect relation of hardship that is well defined in this acrostic poem; thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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It is very nicely looped the thoughts about cause and effect relation of hardship that is well defined in this acrostic poem; thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Vanna1
Each line has real meaning and emphasis. I like the pattern. I am curious to try it out myself. A good theme for the present times. Well done. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Each line has real meaning and emphasis. I like the pattern. I am curious to try it out myself. A good theme for the present times. Well done. Happy writing!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you Vanna1, your words are truly appreciated****kahpot
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this meaningful piece. How frustrating it is to know why you are encountering hardship, but also know there's nothing you can do about it! Stay healthy and safe during these difficult times! Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Congratulations on this meaningful piece. How frustrating it is to know why you are encountering hardship, but also know there's nothing you can do about it! Stay healthy and safe during these difficult times! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank Friend, for your exceptional comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Your poem has a beauty that is realistic and gritty. It reveals the truth of what many of us suffer in life, some more than others, and shines a lights on the inner world of one experiencing hardship. The image is perfect. You have followed the loop format very artistically and it is a strong medium for your message. Very well written and presented!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Your poem has a beauty that is realistic and gritty. It reveals the truth of what many of us suffer in life, some more than others, and shines a lights on the inner world of one experiencing hardship. The image is perfect. You have followed the loop format very artistically and it is a strong medium for your message. Very well written and presented!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your exceptional and inspiring comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is solid expression of author's thoughts of hardship, presented in a lovely format of looped end-to beginning words, in an acrostic design. Lines are simple, precise, clear, elegant, descriptive, dramatic, painting a vivid picture of a defeated person. Shades of gray emphasize the negative connotation.
Would recommend that the poor soul immortalized in this tome, would learn the concepts of the law of attraction :)
Well done! Lovely presentation!
Lucy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This is solid expression of author's thoughts of hardship, presented in a lovely format of looped end-to beginning words, in an acrostic design. Lines are simple, precise, clear, elegant, descriptive, dramatic, painting a vivid picture of a defeated person. Shades of gray emphasize the negative connotation.
Would recommend that the poor soul immortalized in this tome, would learn the concepts of the law of attraction :)
Well done! Lovely presentation!
Lucy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is a beautiful loop poem - hardship, achieved, deflated hopes shadowing hardship. I found this poem very original and so real. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This is a beautiful loop poem - hardship, achieved, deflated hopes shadowing hardship. I found this poem very original and so real. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your exceptional and encouraging review, very much appreciated****kahpot