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Looking for Orion - 2

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Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.

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Comment from royowen
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Well done Deb. You spin a good yarn, the thought of being helped by a Christian seemed to comfort Jack. Cody has lost those life signs, Joe said to Jack if God wanted him there's nothing Jack, but we know we have authority in Christ's name, the same authority that Jesus had, so no, we can have him back, beautifully written, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Ah, Roy ? You're getting ahead of us. :)
    Thanks for reading. :)
    Deb