Looking for Orion - 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Hit - part 1"Brothers fight for faith ... and for their lives.
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
A rifle is a rifle to me! Poor Cody. Man, you should have kept writing--why leave me on a cliffhanger like this? ha ha This is an exciting story!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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A rifle is a rifle to me! Poor Cody. Man, you should have kept writing--why leave me on a cliffhanger like this? ha ha This is an exciting story!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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lol. Hey, aren't we supposed to leave readers on a cliff? haha.
I'll post that first thing tomorrow morning. No need to wait long. :)
Thanks for reading,
Blessings,
Deb
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Oh, thank you. I just woke up. What a joy!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Interesting but alarming, again the rifle exploded and he got shoulder pain and he fell forward in a rush of darkness, stony rocks; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Interesting but alarming, again the rifle exploded and he got shoulder pain and he fell forward in a rush of darkness, stony rocks; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Alcreator. I always appreciate you readinn and reviewing.
Be blessed,
Deb