Lonely Speed Road
A person drives fast in speed roads27 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
That does sound fun, until you crash, of course. Here in FL people drive like they are on a deserted racetrack. It is quite scary at time. Of course I can't complain, I don't always do the speed limit. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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That does sound fun, until you crash, of course. Here in FL people drive like they are on a deserted racetrack. It is quite scary at time. Of course I can't complain, I don't always do the speed limit. Hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Okay I want to know where you could drive like that and not get a ticket outside of an amusement park or a racetrack. That sounds like one heck of a ride! This was great fun with a touch of whimsy. I don't generally speed but you made me want to try! Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Okay I want to know where you could drive like that and not get a ticket outside of an amusement park or a racetrack. That sounds like one heck of a ride! This was great fun with a touch of whimsy. I don't generally speed but you made me want to try! Well done.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Rikki66
Cheyenne, Wyoming, 1964, 3 AM no other car in sight I sit alone at the red light. The light changes I let off the clutch the tires spin slightly and I am off. Before I go a block the Police are behind me. Because my tires spun on the moist pavement I am ticketed for racing. Go figure. Thanks for reminding me, keep up the good work.
Rikki
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Cheyenne, Wyoming, 1964, 3 AM no other car in sight I sit alone at the red light. The light changes I let off the clutch the tires spin slightly and I am off. Before I go a block the Police are behind me. Because my tires spun on the moist pavement I am ticketed for racing. Go figure. Thanks for reminding me, keep up the good work.
Rikki
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story!
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You are most welcome.
Rikki
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Hello, interesting story on risk-taking. Not exactly something I personally would do, but nonetheless thrilling for others.
You need to be careful with your tenses.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Hello, interesting story on risk-taking. Not exactly something I personally would do, but nonetheless thrilling for others.
You need to be careful with your tenses.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I will keep that in mind and thank you for the advice. I am so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from C T Curtis
How a person can write a story in with limited word count is beyond me - but you managed to do it very well. I think you did a really good job and you have a good picture accompanying the words also!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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How a person can write a story in with limited word count is beyond me - but you managed to do it very well. I think you did a really good job and you have a good picture accompanying the words also!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Interesting topic. The last sentence is a run-on. Driving should be the beginning of the last sentence. The rest of the story feels "choppy" with short sentences which seemingly stretch to provide connectivity. I suggest a revision with an even more narrow focus of the message.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Interesting topic. The last sentence is a run-on. Driving should be the beginning of the last sentence. The rest of the story feels "choppy" with short sentences which seemingly stretch to provide connectivity. I suggest a revision with an even more narrow focus of the message.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! Thank you for the advice!
Comment from Earl Corp
The illustration and the story could serve as a page in a children's book. I guess that's about all you cand do in 50 words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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The illustration and the story could serve as a page in a children's book. I guess that's about all you cand do in 50 words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a fun piece of fantasy fun flash fiction :)
The image you've chosen is great, it complements you prose excellently.
Good luck with the competition :)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This is a fun piece of fantasy fun flash fiction :)
The image you've chosen is great, it complements you prose excellently.
Good luck with the competition :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from jeSSaNN
Cute. Very cute. Reminds me of what my father used to be like when he was driving!! Lol. And isn't it just awesome when u can actually drive fast and fun with no harm done and no problems from the law!!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Cute. Very cute. Reminds me of what my father used to be like when he was driving!! Lol. And isn't it just awesome when u can actually drive fast and fun with no harm done and no problems from the law!!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Don't we all enjoy a place where speeding without consequences can be had. Great job expressing this idea. You used your words perfectly to take us on this ride.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Don't we all enjoy a place where speeding without consequences can be had. Great job expressing this idea. You used your words perfectly to take us on this ride.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story!
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Very deserved! I?m 62 and I still have a lead foot myself sometimes LoL!
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You're welcome.
