Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

Ooooh - This is an absolutely delightful read! Tantalizingly other-worldly, combined with pragmatism in the mundane. Not a single character out of place that I can see. Thank you for sharing a great read! Jan

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019

Thank you for reading this part! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, there is going to be more problems for Charles. He won't forget his wife either! He will regret murdering her!:)) Sandra xx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was rather enjoyable to read Sandra. I enjoyed reading about the activity of Veronica in regards to Charles. I do believe that as much as the story sounded far fetched to Gladys. that she chose to believe and understand. Leaving him to himself gave them the opportunity to investigate his study and learn what he was indeed planning. Great job. Hugs and smiles.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019

Thank you, Alie. I'm glad you enjoyed this part, the fun is now beginning, and the VA will wonder what's hit him! LOL Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

reply by aryr on 22-Mar-2019

You are very welcome Sandra, I am eager to read the next, and the next etc chapters.

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Another great chapter, Sandra. You are so good at writing scenes where the bad guy gets spooked - it's as though you're in the room with them, enjoying their pain. Here's hoping Veronica manages to scare Gladys' horrible husband to death, and history can be put back to where it should be.

I'm sooo looking forward to the next chapter!

Alexis xxxx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars and wonderful review, Alexis. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. There will be more spookies coming up. Yes, I love these scenes, they lighten the tension for a while. So I'm really pleased you like how it's going so far. Thanks again, my friend. Big hugs. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Awe, Sandra, this is getting increasingly interesting. I'm so sorry, I don't have a six to give this writing, which it so obviously deserves. I love the story and now they're on to something. Can't wait to reading on. Big hugs. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Ulla, a six mid-week is never expected when I think that most weeks I've used all mine by Tuesday at the latest! lol. There is going to be many fun times in the next few chapters, so stay tuned. I'm hoping to get this book finished before the summer crawls in so I can have some 'me' time. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Sandra, another well written episode, and an amusing one. I like ' as we reached the study door and passed through it' - a nice touch. Once again you end the chapter on a high note. - now what are the amendments? Read the next chapter, of course. ps - got a copy of my book. Very pleased with it - after all the fuss it's better than I expected. Will give you a ring. Keep up the good work - Dorothy xxx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

Oh, thank goodness!! I'm so pleased for you. I'll have to get a copy.

Thanks for the lovely review, and yes, you have to read the next part! LOL. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

I liked your lead in to the time-travel discussion. A nice transition into final comprehension. I smiled at the poker incident. The whole scene was excellent. I relished the thought of him left swatting at empty air.
It will be interesting to read about how Gladys ghostly education progresses.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

Thank you so much, Tom, what a lovely review. Veronica will show Gladys how to do a few things, and then she will learn more on her own. She will enjoy tormenting her husband ... he did murder her! :) More coming soon. Thank you, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

Oh Good, I'm so glad you are getting around to haunting this evil man. We have to wonder all that he is planning for the future, but Veronica and Gladys are going to do some planning too. Planning that will squelch all of his miraculous plans. Who would want to carry out the plans of a madman? LOL You go girls! Nancy:)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

Now Veronica will be pleased she's invisible, she can do a lot of things to upset the Admiral that she couldn't have done had she been a solid person. (and I can have some fun!) Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, and fabulous review, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxxx

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

This is really interesting. You managed to draw me right in. I'm usually quite good at spotting mistakes but couldn't find anything amiss in your story. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

I'm really pleased you enjoyed this part, Judy, thank you so much for the lovely review. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Gladys and Veronica are off to a good start with the plan and it looks as if they're going to have a load of fun! However, I can't imagine that you are going to allow it to be all plain sailing for them!
Just one small suggestion: "No, I haven't(,) come to think of it.
Messing with the things in his study is sure to get under the Admiral's skin...

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

Hi Tony, thank you for pointing out the missing comma, I had to leave one out somewhere!! lol. The Admiral will not be a happy chappie as the time goes on. Veronica will be having some fun now. Thank you for the lovely review, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

Excellent continuation here. Bit of fun at the old man's expense.

if it was me, I'd be doctoring that book or splodging ink all over the bugger. lol

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2019

You are peeping again, Gareth, lol. Veronica has lots of fun coming up, all of which you will approve of, I'm sure. :)) Thank you so much, my friend, for another lovely review. Big hugs. Sandra xxxx