Comment from kidz

Excellent

Time traveling is always interesting. I like this chapter/part. The dialogs ran very smoothly. I am just curious how the time travel happened. In what part I can read the process of time traveling?

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for reading this part in the story. This is the 3rd and final book in the trilogy. The other two have been published. It starts in the first book when Veronica is sent back in time to live parts of the life of an elderly lady she had helped con out of her cottage. She is being moved around by beings she calls, The Powers That Be, simply because she doesn't know how it happens. They do come into the story now and again to discuss what Veronica and Mildred have learnt in order to put right the time-line that has been altered.This is her biggest assignment, and it is a complicated one. Something has happened and she doesn't know what at the moment, only that this 1996 she is in at the moment, isn't her 1996. I hope that helps? Thanks again! :)) Sandra x

reply by kidz on 03-Dec-2018

I see.."being moved"..thanks

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Sandra, well!!!... maybe there's an upside to all of this...were always saying...if only I could go back in time...I could change this...maybe there is something...the power that be...wants Veronica to change...I don't know sweet girl...I'm thinking here...that's not always safe...LOL...now let these two broads make up...they've been friends tooooo long...lets see where it goes from here you little chick-a-dee...very well written my sweet wonderful friend...loveeeee you lotsssss...Linda xxoo

hi to Ian for me...xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

There are a few things l'd like to change if I could go back, but thinking it through, if I could would it be for the better in the end? Would I really be happier if I was rich and beautiful? HELL YES!!!!! Lol. Thank you for all those pretty stars, my wonderful friend. I love this review, and don't worry, Veronica and Mildred could never really fall out, impossible! I won't allow it, for a start. lol. I'm sure the Powers will be wanting Ver to do something, men are like that. Can they get off the chair and turn the tele over? NO. Thank goodness for remotes! Thanks dear friend, I will say hi to Ian, and don't you go forgetting to give my little Noah a big hugs from me, :)) Love you loads, and sending you a hug too! :)) Sandra xxx

reply by l.raven on 04-Dec-2018

the problem is...what would that something be???...I know what men are like...one track minds...ya know....but on with the story...and as far as changing something in my life...I don't need much...I'll take one or the other...rich...or beautiful...LOL...so glad to hear Veronica and Mildred will stay close friends...and as far as men getting off their chairs to change a channel on TV...look at it like this...you wouldn't have to have a cable com...they would only be watching one channel...and a good antenna can get one channel...LOL...you are alwaysssss so welcome much lovely lady....and I will remember to tell Kristy to hug Noah for you...and me...love you the biggest...and sending hugs to you as well...smiling back at you...love xxoo

Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

You are so creative! I love the way your writers mind thinks. It's is fun to take twists, turns and flips with these characters. I can't figure out what is to come...which normally I can. This makes it fun for me because my mind is whirling trying to figure it out. LOVE IT!!!!!

AMAZING writing!! Keep it up girl. I'm enjoying reading this so much!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

More twists and flips to come, lol, and then everyone will finally get that 'Ahhhh' moment! (I hope. lol)

Thank you so much for giving me another of your lovely, precious sixes, my friend, that was so kind of you, and a big hug for the lovely, review, quite turned my face red!! :)) More hugs winging their way over to you. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello sandramitchell
Well if there were any errors I would of missed them You had me so involved reading this chapter has made me to see if , Miss Veronica,
ever gets her memory after baking her head,
I hope I'm referring to Veronica is the one who is confused or is it Mildred? Gert

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Yes you were right, Gert, it was Veronica, but both of them are really confused at the moment. I'll have to sort them out! Thank you so much for the lovely 6 stars, my friend, that is really sweet of you. A really big hug is coming your way! :)) Sandra xx

reply by Gert sherwood on 03-Dec-2018

You are welcome, now long as I know it's Veronica that is confused
Gert

Comment from wordsfromsue

Exceptional

Hmmm, it was the toad of a husband of Gladys, wasn't it? That little lizard ruined history, didn't he?

I simply must stay right here in my seat until you post the next chapter....

Terrific chapter, Sandra!!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Well, that's what some think, but there is a few more twists coming up. It had been the plan at the start of this book, but things changed and got complicated so everyone will have to hang on longer to find out! Thank you for yet another load of lovely stars, my friend. I think you have given me a whole Galaxy of them now, by catching up and reading 6 chapters in one hit!! Love them!!! Big hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

how the strong personality of Gladys, is changed <-- Subj noun: personality | Pred verb: is

Gladys' son Tommy, is now a doctor <-- son | is

Each of the above includes the same nasty error. There is a single comma separating subject from predicate, a big no-no! (In the first, it's the subj & pred of an independent clause), Try to remember not to do this. Leave out the comma!

Now, let me read the story...

Superb writing, as usual. Btw, what post gave you the yellow feather? I don't know how I missed it. Congratulations on SEVEN (wow) published children's books. :)

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Thank you so very much for this 6 star review, my dear friend. I've taken those errant commas out.

I received the yellow feather for my first children's book, Hedgerow Capers, it was picked up by a publisher that same year. They closed down earlier this year, and had 300 of my books still in stock, so they asked me if I wanted them as it was in my contract should something like this happen. I'm taking them around the Children in Need charities. I have 60 here already to give to any little ones that come along in the family. I've never tried for another yellow feather, some have 4 or 5 of them! :)) xxx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Oh, dear, Sandra. So you've changed history in this wonderfully written chapter, but obviously that has somehow to be changed into was is the reality of the day. I just can't see the reason for The Powers To Be to change history. Well, I have to wait and see. A big hug. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Thank you so much, Ulla for your lovely review and all those stars!! The Powers must have their reasons, we'll soon find out what it is, (hopefully!) Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Another fantastic chapter, Sandra. I don't know if everyone appreciates how much thought has gone into your research and imagination to bring this fantastic story together, but I certainly do!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Thank you so much, Alexis, for all those lovely stars and for such an nice review, too. Yes, it's amazing how much research does go into a 'fiction' story when it Incorporated so some factual points as well. But it's all fun! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Sandra. I enjoyed reading this chapter. Even though I don't read every one of them, I do have the gist and we are still in the same time frame as my last reading. You've chosen a complicated plot for your book, but handling it extremely well--logically and with great interest for your reader, interweaving historical events into it.

I did find what might be a tiny typo here:
"twilled (did you mean twirled?) her around and around, laughing as soap suds splashed everywhere."
Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for finding that nit, Marilyn, I think where the print is so fine, no one else spotted it, including me! I'm honoured that you think I'm doing a good job with this plot, my friend, when this book began I didn't realise how it would change and become so complicated, but it's fun sorting it out. Iol. I'm glad you enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

A fantastic chapter Sandra. Poor Mildred doesn't have a clue what Veronica is talking about or asking. Life is certainly different and something has definitely caused the change in not only their life style but history. It will be interesting to learn what the old newspaper said about the war. Great level of suspense. Thanks so much my friend for sharing. Smiles and hugs.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018

Thank you!! What a lovely review, Alie, I really appreciate your comments. I'm delighted you are enjoying it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by aryr on 02-Dec-2018

You are so welcome Sandra