Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Well in the middle of nowhere must be great (I too live in Australia) but not so many animals, A great read about the day in the life of a flower excellently displayed well done****kahpot

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thank you very much for the kind review, it is much appreciated. Which state are you in? Craig

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Craig,

I'm confused. Where have the homo sapiens gone? The hibiscus flower is beautiful, this is a lovely presentation. All of your syllables are in the proper order. This one is on an entirely different plane than the one you shared with me earlier. This is a poetic, flowery piece.

Good luck in the contest.

Kim

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Hi Kim,
I changed my mind (no prize for stating the obvious?) lol
The monkeys can keep...

Thanks for the great review.
Craig