A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Naked"Assorted poems of love
21 total reviews
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend. This was extremely romantic and filled with passion, many should enjoy it. I enjoy the beach as well, or the quietness of my study in the early morning. Nice poem, I enjoyed, Loyd
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Hello poet friend. This was extremely romantic and filled with passion, many should enjoy it. I enjoy the beach as well, or the quietness of my study in the early morning. Nice poem, I enjoyed, Loyd
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Oh my word...is it really you? Where in the world have you been keeping yourself? I have missed you, Loyd.
Thank you, for this lovely review :)
Always,
Missy
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Yep. Me alright. Just very busy my friend. You are very welocme. Loyd
Comment from petalangela
Naked is how we should all be since my writing of Naked Soul I had had so many layers removed hopefully never to return. We need to be naked and seen as we truly are
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Naked is how we should all be since my writing of Naked Soul I had had so many layers removed hopefully never to return. We need to be naked and seen as we truly are
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Bless you Pet, I love ya sweetie!!!
Always your bestie,
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, you could be writing this to anyone in the world or just for what it says, but there is no doubt that however many read it, they will all be thinking or wishing just maybe. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Wow, you could be writing this to anyone in the world or just for what it says, but there is no doubt that however many read it, they will all be thinking or wishing just maybe. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Thanks, a bunch Ric, for this! I wrote it with someone in mind yes :) Thanks again sweetie.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Linda Engel
Just don't lay naked in the sun. (burn, baby, burn). I remember those days I enjoyed being naked for my lover. The touch, the cologne , the kisses on bare skin. ..... (sigh).....
(Linda, snap out of it )
Words do have an effect on the body. Sensual phrases can make your body tingly and perky. I guess when the lover is not around a good book will do.
I absolutely adore the last two photos you used of the pale skin and the red lips.
awesome.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Just don't lay naked in the sun. (burn, baby, burn). I remember those days I enjoyed being naked for my lover. The touch, the cologne , the kisses on bare skin. ..... (sigh).....
(Linda, snap out of it )
Words do have an effect on the body. Sensual phrases can make your body tingly and perky. I guess when the lover is not around a good book will do.
I absolutely adore the last two photos you used of the pale skin and the red lips.
awesome.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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LOL...Are you ok hon?!!! I am giggling now, just so ya know!
Thanks for the giggle and the great review, Linda xx
Always,
Missy
Comment from JTStone
Now that's the girl I like to hear from. If I only didn't have one too many women in my life...
If you would have traded the length of lines 5 and 6, you would have a feminine form out of the body of the words as well.
Just noticed...
JT
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Now that's the girl I like to hear from. If I only didn't have one too many women in my life...
If you would have traded the length of lines 5 and 6, you would have a feminine form out of the body of the words as well.
Just noticed...
JT
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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JT, JT, JT, thank you so much!!!! I have come to watch for your reviews :) You are such a splendid writer in your own rite!
Hugs,
Missy xx
Comment from scongrove
I love how you expressed your raw emotions in this. Your words reminded me of the things my boyfriend says to me. He's always asking me to let go and show myself to him ... all of me.
I'm not sure if you can relate to this, but I think most women feel vulnerable when it comes to letting down their wall. It's hard to put aside all the things about ourselves that make us feel ugly. I'm slowly letting down my wall and feeling free to let him see the real me.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I loved it!
Shana :)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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I love how you expressed your raw emotions in this. Your words reminded me of the things my boyfriend says to me. He's always asking me to let go and show myself to him ... all of me.
I'm not sure if you can relate to this, but I think most women feel vulnerable when it comes to letting down their wall. It's hard to put aside all the things about ourselves that make us feel ugly. I'm slowly letting down my wall and feeling free to let him see the real me.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I loved it!
Shana :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Your review has lifted me today, Shana! To know that we touch someone with our work, is the best thing we can get. I love ya for that, sweetie!!
Always,
Missy xx
Comment from Domino 2
You can always email me a photo, Missy, if this is really true. LOL.
Excellent expression of desire and the 'wantonness' to bare your heart (and other things) to this special person and object of your passion.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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You can always email me a photo, Missy, if this is really true. LOL.
Excellent expression of desire and the 'wantonness' to bare your heart (and other things) to this special person and object of your passion.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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LOL, Ray. You, always make me smile!!
Thanks for this lovely light-hearted review :) I love it!!
Always,
Missy xx
Comment from Tessa Kay
I like the way this poem ends. So many relationships are only skin deep, built on gratification, not appreciation. I like how the word naked changes from outside to inside. Nice job.
Wish I could go to the beach to write. It's only 25 minutes by car, but windy and freezing...
:)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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I like the way this poem ends. So many relationships are only skin deep, built on gratification, not appreciation. I like how the word naked changes from outside to inside. Nice job.
Wish I could go to the beach to write. It's only 25 minutes by car, but windy and freezing...
:)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Brrr. Where you live Tessa? It is just turning into fall here but still rather warm. Still beach weather :)
Thank you, for this lovely review of my work!
Always,
Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
I do like it! It is very sexy but not crude. It made me a little warm and left me wanting:) lol.
Nice job with the erotic poem Missy.
Teresa
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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I do like it! It is very sexy but not crude. It made me a little warm and left me wanting:) lol.
Nice job with the erotic poem Missy.
Teresa
Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Smilin...warmand wanting?!! That's a dang 10 review for me...lol
Thanks Teresa, honestly xx
Missy
Comment from Dean Kuch
We are never more vulnerable than when we are completely naked. That's why there are so many shower scenes in horror films. Well that, and for the sake of gratuitous nudity, of course.
That being said, when you give your "all" to someone, when you bare your soul--open up to them emotionally and intimately--you are even more than vulnerable. You are in love...
Well done, Missy.
~Dean
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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We are never more vulnerable than when we are completely naked. That's why there are so many shower scenes in horror films. Well that, and for the sake of gratuitous nudity, of course.
That being said, when you give your "all" to someone, when you bare your soul--open up to them emotionally and intimately--you are even more than vulnerable. You are in love...
Well done, Missy.
~Dean
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2015
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Your absolutely right again, Dean! Love is so powerful. It can be the joy of our lives or our utter destruction!
Thank you for your always generous reviews.
Missy
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It's always my pleasure, Missy.
~Dean