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sbedian
Short but well written, it is concise and covers enough ground to get the reader to want more. Looking forward to seeing the next segment. I liked the picture of the duck as well, nice one.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
Thanks for your comments and support. Glad you enjoyed this one. All stories in this book will be 150 words or less. So, follow along.