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Comment from TAB_that's me
This is hilarious though maybe it wasn't intended that way:) Great story telling. I found no spag. Good luck to you.
Teresa
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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This is hilarious though maybe it wasn't intended that way:) Great story telling. I found no spag. Good luck to you.
Teresa
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Teresa, for the excellent review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Very creative quick story. It should make a great contest entry. I wish you the best. I loved the part about the mother standing in the tub; that was a good one. Easy to read and enjoyable. Good work
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Excellent. Very creative quick story. It should make a great contest entry. I wish you the best. I loved the part about the mother standing in the tub; that was a good one. Easy to read and enjoyable. Good work
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thank you, PBB, for the excellent review.