Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Nice haiku about Daffodils. Good job with the syllable count. The kigo is very clear and the satori line is ok. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015

Thank you Gypsy Blue Rose for your review rating and comments. With appreciation

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

My late mother's daffodils bloom every March so I adore any poems about daffodils. Daffodils do signal the arrival of spring and the warmer weather. Excellent use of words.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015

Thank you mermaids yes I love Daffodils as that means Spring is nearly here and they are lovely to see everywhere. I appreciate your great review.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Beautiful piece of work. I love flowers so perhaps I am prejudice; but I find it absolutely lovely. Excellent spelling and nice choice of words. Look forward to more of your poems.

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 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015

Thanks you pretty bluebirds for your lovely review.They are one of my favourites also and it is nearing spring time here and they are beginning to bloom. They always remind me of my childhood too. Appreciate your comments