Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Good contest piece. Love the bonus. He is always full of surprises. We are very fortunate to be created by a loving God. Hope you win. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

I am pleased you enjoyed my poem, thanks for the excellent review.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very good author nice couplets
about the delights of the colorful rainbow

Love the bonus rainbow from God for us

Gert

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Thanks for your excellent review, I really appreciate it.

reply by Gert sherwood on 10-Jun-2015

You are welcome

Gert

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Nice rainbow entry written in good rhyming couplets. Good proximate rhyme with sun/outshone. Good luck to you.
~Teresa~

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

Thanks for your great review, it is much appreciated.

Comment from Saucey

Excellent

What a beautiful poem, simple and elegant and a joy to read, I like the overall presentation, the Aa rhyming scheme caused this gem to flow effortless, thank you so much for sharing:)

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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015

I really appreciate your great review and comments.