Magical Puffins
who'd ha' thought???66 total reviews
Comment from chasennov
who'd ha' thought??? Well, it was said, and you did win. Congratulations in doing such a fine poem too. I quite enjoyed the read and it sounded great. Well done.
Magical Puffins
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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who'd ha' thought??? Well, it was said, and you did win. Congratulations in doing such a fine poem too. I quite enjoyed the read and it sounded great. Well done.
Magical Puffins
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks Chas! :)S
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You are welcome, Sharyn.
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading your smooth rhyming writing.
Some flexible, mixable Mexican muffins
I took to the zoo and I fed to the puffins
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading your smooth rhyming writing.
Some flexible, mixable Mexican muffins
I took to the zoo and I fed to the puffins
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks thee-name! :)S
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thank you! :>)
Comment from jlsavell
Visiobary1234,
This poem was so very delightful to read! It's rhythm so upbeat and magical.
Our world is made up of rhythm from our heartbeat to a simple mundane industrial beat as as train rolling down the railroad tracks. Your poem has that kind of fun rhythm of the train. It fast pace lends to the fun tone of this exceptional work. And to think, you created this from a list of words! Quite impressive, undeniably.
Loved it!
Jlsavell
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Visiobary1234,
This poem was so very delightful to read! It's rhythm so upbeat and magical.
Our world is made up of rhythm from our heartbeat to a simple mundane industrial beat as as train rolling down the railroad tracks. Your poem has that kind of fun rhythm of the train. It fast pace lends to the fun tone of this exceptional work. And to think, you created this from a list of words! Quite impressive, undeniably.
Loved it!
Jlsavell
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks Jl! :)Sharyn
Comment from stephybs
An excellent and very light hearted piece that has been cleverly put together. Love the art work and thought that went in to This cuddly poem. Excellent!
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An excellent and very light hearted piece that has been cleverly put together. Love the art work and thought that went in to This cuddly poem. Excellent!
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Bless you for your lovely sixer Steph! :)Sharyn
Comment from jmdg1954
Typical me, late to the party. Congrat's on winning the contest. After reading your poem, I would have voted your way as well. This was bouncy, whimsical and a perfect rhyme. I'm all out of sixes, sorry.
Congratulations once again, John
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Typical me, late to the party. Congrat's on winning the contest. After reading your poem, I would have voted your way as well. This was bouncy, whimsical and a perfect rhyme. I'm all out of sixes, sorry.
Congratulations once again, John
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks so much John! :)Sharyn
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Magical Puffins", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. A huffin' Puffin, should have the very best. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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"Magical Puffins", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. A huffin' Puffin, should have the very best. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks again D! :)Sharyn
Sharyn, you're very welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! I am out of sixes and sadly so otherwise this poem would be decorated with a six. This is an absolutely wonderful poem and indeed a worthy contest winner as well. The rhyming and flow is to say the least exquisite.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Wow! I am out of sixes and sadly so otherwise this poem would be decorated with a six. This is an absolutely wonderful poem and indeed a worthy contest winner as well. The rhyming and flow is to say the least exquisite.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you so much Chris - I had fun with this one! :)Sharyn
Comment from Brabazon
Your poem draws attention to the fact puffins (and animals in general) need more than basic care, that one should go a bit further to find out their broaders needs and provide for them.
You did a good job finding a place for those group of words in a poem that made sense and stirred a swirl in the heart.
Great poem it was!
Brabazon
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Your poem draws attention to the fact puffins (and animals in general) need more than basic care, that one should go a bit further to find out their broaders needs and provide for them.
You did a good job finding a place for those group of words in a poem that made sense and stirred a swirl in the heart.
Great poem it was!
Brabazon
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you Brabazon! :)Sharyn
Comment from LIJ Red
Too bad you can't combine contests. This poem would fit the nonsense poem prompt rather neatly, as well as the required words prompt. I like the imagery and the rhymes and meter.
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Too bad you can't combine contests. This poem would fit the nonsense poem prompt rather neatly, as well as the required words prompt. I like the imagery and the rhymes and meter.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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My thoughts exactly LIJ! GRR! :)Sharyn
Comment from JourneyHolm
Ah! This poem is so much fun! I feel like a child wanting to slip and slide with these silly creatures. The features of this poem work very well with the prompt. This poem reminds me of a child with a wild imagination that can't do anything but express it to the world. Thank you for sharing!
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Ah! This poem is so much fun! I feel like a child wanting to slip and slide with these silly creatures. The features of this poem work very well with the prompt. This poem reminds me of a child with a wild imagination that can't do anything but express it to the world. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you so much J - I had stacks of fun with this one! :)Sharyn