The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 98 "Moonrise"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
23 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Carolyn; it's a beautifully written poem that I enjoyed reading very much. It is very heartwarming and written with and read with ease. The rhyming neither forced nor labored was also well formulated to which each word of the rhyming fit with the concept of the poem and of each line. The topic is timeless and very annotative and philosophically sound. An excellent acrostic poem that read very smoothly. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Carolyn; it's a beautifully written poem that I enjoyed reading very much. It is very heartwarming and written with and read with ease. The rhyming neither forced nor labored was also well formulated to which each word of the rhyming fit with the concept of the poem and of each line. The topic is timeless and very annotative and philosophically sound. An excellent acrostic poem that read very smoothly. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Thank you Alex for this fine and affirming review of Moonrise.
:-) Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
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You are dearly and sincerely welcome Carolyn
Comment from Neonewman
OOOH! Great entry for this acrostic poetry writing contest young lady! I am a huge fan of the artwork you have chosen to accompany this brilliant piece you have so well crafted. This is a six star rating all the way from me.
Good luck in the contest and God bless!
Steve
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OOOH! Great entry for this acrostic poetry writing contest young lady! I am a huge fan of the artwork you have chosen to accompany this brilliant piece you have so well crafted. This is a six star rating all the way from me.
Good luck in the contest and God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Wow, thank you from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate your wonderful comments and the shining stars. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of work. I love this picture and the poem does it justice. Well done.
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This is a beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of work. I love this picture and the poem does it justice. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks Tom, this is not one of my photos but I do a great deal of photography in the West. We leave for Arizona on 1/12 for a couple of weeks. My inspiration is fueled from scenery such as this. As always your comments are so appreciated.
:-) Carolyn
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Good for you
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem and again you did a great job in writing it. I like the Bible verse too. It's always so much to fun to read your poetry. The picture you used with it is nice also.
Kat
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem and again you did a great job in writing it. I like the Bible verse too. It's always so much to fun to read your poetry. The picture you used with it is nice also.
Kat
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Dear Kat,
I am so happy you get pleasure from my work. That means the world to me.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from GE Parson
Hi Carolyn,
Super acrostic poem with a good spiritual side to it.
It takes a good imagination and command of the English
language to come up with acrostics that make sense,which this one does.
I'm way behind on responding so I'm going to leave you with this small return,
God bless 2015,
Friend Jerry
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Hi Carolyn,
Super acrostic poem with a good spiritual side to it.
It takes a good imagination and command of the English
language to come up with acrostics that make sense,which this one does.
I'm way behind on responding so I'm going to leave you with this small return,
God bless 2015,
Friend Jerry
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Thank you Jerry, Happy 2015 to you too my friend. Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely contest entry which meets all of the contest requirements splendidly. The message is simply stunning as it paints a perfect picture within the reader's mind. Simply lovely and I wish you all the best in the judging.
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This is a lovely contest entry which meets all of the contest requirements splendidly. The message is simply stunning as it paints a perfect picture within the reader's mind. Simply lovely and I wish you all the best in the judging.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks for this wonderful review. I hope the judges like it too. LOL, :- ) Carolyn
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Those judges are a tough bunch LOL!
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smiles
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Nice acrostic, describing the rise of moonlight. Good alliteration of the s sound in the first line. Well done!
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Sarah
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Nice acrostic, describing the rise of moonlight. Good alliteration of the s sound in the first line. Well done!
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Sarah
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks Sarah for your comments., :-) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
I love the way you have made this a dedication and a recognition of God placing the moon to rule the night and the sun to rule the day, beautiful language has turned an everyday thing we may take for granted into a piece of poetic art, well done, Carolyn, well done, blessings, Roy.
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I love the way you have made this a dedication and a recognition of God placing the moon to rule the night and the sun to rule the day, beautiful language has turned an everyday thing we may take for granted into a piece of poetic art, well done, Carolyn, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks Roy, I have a hard time not praising the Lord in anything I write. So glad you liked this one. :-) Love to E as well. Carolyn
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Most welcome
Comment from giraffmang
Your fifth line is missing from the poem. There is no line beginning with 'R'. This will not meet the competition requirements as it is not an acrostic. Swiftly to the editing room!
The poem itself is good but this is a big oversight!
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Your fifth line is missing from the poem. There is no line beginning with 'R'. This will not meet the competition requirements as it is not an acrostic. Swiftly to the editing room!
The poem itself is good but this is a big oversight!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Hi there, and thank you so very, very much. I can only attribute the oversight to the hour it was posted. LOL It is fixed, I hope you will read it again and have favorable thoughts. :-) Carolyn
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I have revisited and returned the star I had retained. All the very best
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I am grateful for your assistance, thank you for the rerate... :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
oh what a beautiful set up this picture is for this poem it is delightful to see such a marvelous piece of work great job is done here
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oh what a beautiful set up this picture is for this poem it is delightful to see such a marvelous piece of work great job is done here
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
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Thank you once again for a terrific review and rating..:-) Carolyn
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welcome