The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 99 "He holds"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
24 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Carolyn; a very tranquil and serene and also very beautifully written. Also the picture that you chosen show how temperate and moving your poem really is represented very well. Your poems writing shows how sincere and truly honest how you feel about your parents. Your use of alliteration in your poem was also very interesting is you used it in: "deep despair". The rhyming was done fairly well and neither forced nor labored and also defined as near or oblique rhymes. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always Carolyn.
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Carolyn; a very tranquil and serene and also very beautifully written. Also the picture that you chosen show how temperate and moving your poem really is represented very well. Your poems writing shows how sincere and truly honest how you feel about your parents. Your use of alliteration in your poem was also very interesting is you used it in: "deep despair". The rhyming was done fairly well and neither forced nor labored and also defined as near or oblique rhymes. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always Carolyn.
Alex
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Dear Alex,
Thank you once again for the wonderful comments and encouragement. I am delighted you liked the poem.
:-) Carolyn
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You are so sincerely welcome Caroly
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
You come up with great ideas to write the most beautiful poetry. I love this one too. I wish my mind would give me ideas to write some, but I'm not thinking straight nowadays because of my forgetfulness. Well, truthfully I never could think of any good ideas or I'd be writing a lot more.
Kat
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Hi Carolyn,
You come up with great ideas to write the most beautiful poetry. I love this one too. I wish my mind would give me ideas to write some, but I'm not thinking straight nowadays because of my forgetfulness. Well, truthfully I never could think of any good ideas or I'd be writing a lot more.
Kat
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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I have loved all of your work. My mind had to have a break for awhile and now I am getting back into the swing. Thank you Kat, I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
Love, Carolyn
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
* SIGH * This is deeply moving as each word resonates in the heart and soul. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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* SIGH * This is deeply moving as each word resonates in the heart and soul. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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And thank you for this wonderful review. I'm so glad it was so meaningful for you.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM. I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR POETRY. I AM GLAD MY FAITH HAS KEPT MY HUMAN SPIRIT STRONG.
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM. I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR POETRY. I AM GLAD MY FAITH HAS KEPT MY HUMAN SPIRIT STRONG.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Dear V.
It is so good to see your review. I pray you are doing better and that 2015 will be a good year for you. Thanks for your fine comments.
Love, Carolyn
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Four lines - a short poem - but when I came to the last line I was deeply moved. I second, and applaud, what you have written. Lovely sunset. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Four lines - a short poem - but when I came to the last line I was deeply moved. I second, and applaud, what you have written. Lovely sunset. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Thank you Dorothy for you fine remarks, I am glad you were touched by the poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Neonewman
Awe! Nothing better than the heaven above. I love this wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered young lady! The artwork that you have chosen to compliment this piece is spot on.
God bless!
Steve
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Awe! Nothing better than the heaven above. I love this wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered young lady! The artwork that you have chosen to compliment this piece is spot on.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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I appreciate your insightful comments , thank you so much.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from patcelaw
Nice poem. The truth is when we are in despair as we take that to the Lord he comforts us, And when we go to Him we have thoughts of those loved ones who are with Him. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Nice poem. The truth is when we are in despair as we take that to the Lord he comforts us, And when we go to Him we have thoughts of those loved ones who are with Him. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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You got it Patricia, thanks for your fine comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
God is so good, I know he holds all things in the palm, but He favours His beloved children, and those that are under their care, there is absolutely nothing that is He won't do for His beloved, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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God is so good, I know he holds all things in the palm, but He favours His beloved children, and those that are under their care, there is absolutely nothing that is He won't do for His beloved, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
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Thank you dear Roy for the awesome review and rating. I most of all am grateful you liked the poem. God is so good.
:-) Carolyn
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Most welcome, Carolyn
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Most welcome, Carolyn
Comment from NurseBarb
A lovely poem written in so few words, but packs a powerful message. The world does seem lost, and getting worse with each passing day. Thank you for reminding us all to just look to our Heavenly Father for guidance. Great Job!
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A lovely poem written in so few words, but packs a powerful message. The world does seem lost, and getting worse with each passing day. Thank you for reminding us all to just look to our Heavenly Father for guidance. Great Job!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
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Thank you NurseBarb for your wonderful comments about 'He holds.' I appreciate your sweet encouragement. :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
He holds them near and safe until we are able to be reunited with them in a far distant future (hopefully).
Nicely told, Carolyn. John
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He holds them near and safe until we are able to be reunited with them in a far distant future (hopefully).
Nicely told, Carolyn. John
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
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Thanks John for your comments and generous rating, Take care and stay well in 2015.
:-) Carolyn