Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Lots of imagination
Strong descriptive words create vivid imagery of a moonlit night
Well executed ABC poem and a strong entry for the contest

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

Thanks emrpoems.
It would be nice to win.. :-) .. So happy you enjoyed this one.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

That is so very true, Carolyn, and your lovely description of such a night -- in true ABC poetic form and fashion -- truly brings such a scene to life. This is a well composed, outstanding entry for the contest utilizing fantastic imagery.

Wonderfully done, and best of luck to you! :)

~Dean

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

Thanks Dean,
I appreciate your fine review and encouragement, as well as the good wishes.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Dean Kuch on 02-Jan-2015

You're very welcome, Carolyn. :}

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

This was written beautifully and the photo enhances the words as well. The rhythm was right on as well.. Just glad I live in Hawaii where I can experience the snow and ice through someones words rather than feel it in real time lol
TK

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

You old coward you. LOL.... I don't blame you.. Best to look at pictures only, especially if you live in Hawaii. I have always wanted to visit there, but I must admit, I love our 4 seasons.
Hope you are doing well.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from Sanku

Exceptional

This is a brilliant verbal painting of night scene in winter.And a very good ABC poem.Moonlight drenching ice clad grass-i loved this imagery.All te best for the contest.
Wish you and your family a very very happy and peaceful New Year.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

And a healthy and happy New Year to you and yours as well Sanku. Thank you once again for this fantastic review and shining stars. You made my day.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I wish you luck now
for I might forget later.
I love the artwork you choose for your poem.
It is a perfect match.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

Thanks misscookie,
so glad you enjoyed the poem and the art work. I appreciate your fine comments and good luck wishes.
:-) Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 04-Jan-2015

You're very welcome, Peace God be with you.
Cookie

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your words allow the reader to see and feel the moonlight shining on ice clad grass looks like diamonds even the Queen would be jealous

good imagery
good rhyme not forced
good alliteration in
jewellery, jealous

flows easy read

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

Thanks for the great review and through comments. :-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 03-Jan-2015

most welcome....SC <:> Faye

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is indeed a beautiful landscape that this pristine wilderness is depicting with this winter scene in the picture. How beautiful it is and this poem adds to the beauty. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

Thanks Tom for this great review. So glad you enjoyed both poem and pic. :-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 04-Jan-2015

My pleasure

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

Wonderful perception Carolyn. Basides following the contest rules, you have used good alliteration in this abc poem as well. Well done!

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

I appreciate your fine comments Sarah, thanks so much, :-) Carolyn

Comment from kentuckywoman53

Exceptional

Another wonderful composition and a picture that reflects your well written and descriptive poem. Even without the picture your words bring a mental vision that matches the beauty you described. Excellent!!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

Dear Millie,
I am so glad you enjoyed this little presentation. You are such an encouragement to me. That shiny six is an added bonus.
love you, Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is a beautiful ABC poem. I loved every word of it. The picture you chose
to go with it is outstanding. I love how snow sparkles and shines. I just don't
like when it gets really cold outside. I'm just wondering if drench should be
drenched?

Best wishes in the contest, Kat

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015

You are correct about the drenched, I have corrected it some time ago but so appreciate your catching that too. Glad you liked the poem my friend,
Love, Carolyn

reply by MizKat on 02-Jan-2015

I never know if I should point out tiny mistakes to someone or not. I'm glad it didn't bother you that you just had to add a couple letters to drench.