Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I bet it is the luck of the Irish. Or the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Good contest piece. Well done. I hope you win.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like your poetic tribute to someone presumably the love of your life, but I don't think your as clever as you think you are, maybe she actually likes you. I like this senryu, I think it has a chance, correct syllable count! Well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Wow, thirty years. In these days and time that is sure a great achievement. Congrats. The poem is well done. Good luck in the contest. You seem to be winning everything lately :)

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2014

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

It short, sweet and almost reads like a newspaper personals advertisement. I liked it and thought it was very well done.

Good luck in the contest
Michelle

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from gypsymoth

Excellent

Happy Anniversary to you both. Such a romantic Irish heart you have, God's blest you both.

Gypsymoth

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

Lovely story told in this very short form. It says enough to entice me to fill in the blanks. I am intrigued as much by what is left unsaid: the gift of the senyu. Thaks! Caroline

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014