Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

I've never heard of a ptarmigan so this makes your little ditty even more interesting. Not only a well written poem, but new facts to learn in the process.
Good luck

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks! Glad you found this poem interesting, and educational.
Appreciate your comments ... ;)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a lovely and interesting 3-5-3 poem with great concrete visual imagery. I love the satori: "feathered fnow." Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks, Jeanie - glad you liked the imagery and satori. Appreciate your comments ... ;)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Great poem. I love everything about it. The picture is perfect. The words are so fitting. There are no changes needed. Good job and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments ... ;)