To Catch A Breeze
3-5-3 Air13 total reviews
Comment from onebrit
You compressed a life into just a few words, and it fit perfectly. The invisible life force. You captured it so well. Hope is such a strong word, and even at end of life it is still there. Enjoyed your lovely words.
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You compressed a life into just a few words, and it fit perfectly. The invisible life force. You captured it so well. Hope is such a strong word, and even at end of life it is still there. Enjoyed your lovely words.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Well chosen words to convey your strong spiritual message about how essential air is to our lives, from birth to death. Great visuals and enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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Well chosen words to convey your strong spiritual message about how essential air is to our lives, from birth to death. Great visuals and enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
Great entry for the 3-5-3 Air contest and rather deeper than most with its focus being the purpose of our whole lives.
This should do well.
Good luck.
Steve
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Great entry for the 3-5-3 Air contest and rather deeper than most with its focus being the purpose of our whole lives.
This should do well.
Good luck.
Steve
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2014