Apps for one and all
Poem in 5-7-512 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, I see everybody with their apps and just have to shake my head. I have a cheap phone with a cheap plan. I can't afford that expense. good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, I see everybody with their apps and just have to shake my head. I have a cheap phone with a cheap plan. I can't afford that expense. good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thanks for reading and engaging -zanya
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good social commentary on the nature of electronic apps and how they can never be a substitute for human nature, be it be the best or worst of human emotion
Brooke
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good social commentary on the nature of electronic apps and how they can never be a substitute for human nature, be it be the best or worst of human emotion
Brooke
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014
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Thanks for a great review zanya