The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "5-7-5 Undoubtable faith"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Witwoo
Oh, how I love a good poem about spirituality. I like the brightness of the background, which lent some excitement or even joy to the picture and the Haiku. Well done today.
WW
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
Oh, how I love a good poem about spirituality. I like the brightness of the background, which lent some excitement or even joy to the picture and the Haiku. Well done today.
WW
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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I appreciate your fine comments
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
What a wonderful tribute your dad! Thx for sharing the family pix - the best kind of art. So few words allowed but they pack a wallop.
Well done - good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
Hi
What a wonderful tribute your dad! Thx for sharing the family pix - the best kind of art. So few words allowed but they pack a wallop.
Well done - good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thanks Jax for this great review.
Comment from donette1914
very sweet of faith and trust and hope a father and son and i love the photo and i felt it was heartfelt and it was a pleasure to read your work
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
very sweet of faith and trust and hope a father and son and i love the photo and i felt it was heartfelt and it was a pleasure to read your work
Comment Written 07-May-2014
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Thanks donette1914, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an encouraging message of faith and hope in the promise of the resurrected life. (Note: you have a typo in your title.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
This is an encouraging message of faith and hope in the promise of the resurrected life. (Note: you have a typo in your title.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thanks Jeanie for the comments and the edit, I will fix
Comment from TAB_that's me
I love the message in your little spiritual 5-7-5 poem. Perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~teresa~~
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reply by the author on 07-May-2014
I love the message in your little spiritual 5-7-5 poem. Perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~teresa~~
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Comment Written 07-May-2014
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Thanks Teresa for the good luck wished, I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from akulkumol
Your definition of trust and hope is really admirable. The angle you have chosen to describe it is really lovely. loved reading it and thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2014
Your definition of trust and hope is really admirable. The angle you have chosen to describe it is really lovely. loved reading it and thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest.
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Comment Written 07-May-2014
reply by the author on 07-May-2014
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Thanks for the kind comments and good wishes. :-)