senryu piggy has new name
pig changes his name19 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
He took the name Cheese......well that's just grate
Was he grate-ful for his name?no !.......it's better than being full of bologna.....I guess that was unkind....
Well done
God bless
  |
He took the name Cheese......well that's just grate
Was he grate-ful for his name?no !.......it's better than being full of bologna.....I guess that was unkind....
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Who in their right mind would name a pig bologna? Porky, maybe, or Wilbur, Babe, even. But bologna?! That does seem a bit cruel. At least lil' piggy was able to change his name--for posterity's sake, of course.
OINK! (That's "good luck" in piganese)
|
Who in their right mind would name a pig bologna? Porky, maybe, or Wilbur, Babe, even. But bologna?! That does seem a bit cruel. At least lil' piggy was able to change his name--for posterity's sake, of course.
OINK! (That's "good luck" in piganese)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
How I love the senryu poetic form, though, correct me if I'm wrong, doesn't the senryu evoke other than humor most of the time? Doesn't matter ... What you've done here is created a very humorous poem in a very difficult format.
|
How I love the senryu poetic form, though, correct me if I'm wrong, doesn't the senryu evoke other than humor most of the time? Doesn't matter ... What you've done here is created a very humorous poem in a very difficult format.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Lysa Schuler
This was a strange piece to me. Bologna, and cheese I suppose go well together. And I guess that makes a funny. Good writ. God bless.
|
This was a strange piece to me. Bologna, and cheese I suppose go well together. And I guess that makes a funny. Good writ. God bless.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from DonandVicki
Bologna and cheese, Now I get it. Cute write with a cute stuffed animal photograph to go along with it. A real contender in the contest. Don and Vicki
|
Bologna and cheese, Now I get it. Cute write with a cute stuffed animal photograph to go along with it. A real contender in the contest. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from lancellot
Well, I guess any kind of meat name is not good for a pig, Ham would have been much worse, or maybe bacon. But I like cheese, it's safe and neutral. Good on the syllable count.
|
Well, I guess any kind of meat name is not good for a pig, Ham would have been much worse, or maybe bacon. But I like cheese, it's safe and neutral. Good on the syllable count.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
A fun look at how this unkindly named pig decided to change his own fortune LOL
an amusing response to this prompt
Brooke
|
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
A fun look at how this unkindly named pig decided to change his own fortune LOL
an amusing response to this prompt
Brooke
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from al1801
Whoever named the pig Bologna needs to be smoked him or herself :) This was a witty little poem and you did capture the 5-7-5 witty animals theme. good effort.
|
Whoever named the pig Bologna needs to be smoked him or herself :) This was a witty little poem and you did capture the 5-7-5 witty animals theme. good effort.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
Comment from Starlit Ink
Well, that'll show 'em, lol. The picture is adorable, and the poem is witty, so you definitely fulfilled the prompt. A pig renaming himself is tired of all the bologna that we people are full of. Best of luck to you in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
|
Well, that'll show 'em, lol. The picture is adorable, and the poem is witty, so you definitely fulfilled the prompt. A pig renaming himself is tired of all the bologna that we people are full of. Best of luck to you in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014