Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

I like your contest entry here very much. The picture enticed me into your page and I was not disappointed. I like the picture you painted with your words of a genteel day the day sfter the big day. Wish you luck - Dinah

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

thanks for the review

Comment from ClarkLady

Exceptional

I think this poem is outstanding. The gentle yet strong imagery of nature plus the romantic element are just beautiful.

Kudos, I really enjoyed this senryu.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

thanks for the great review,senryu translates to river willow

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Almost as if the willow is a veil or canopy over the newly weds. Willows sure attract muses, don't they? Best wishes with your entry.

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

thanks for the review

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this senryu poem about the picnic in the romantic spot that ended up being the place for the ceremony. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review.Senryu translates into river willow so I thought was a cute connection, cheers