A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "The Beast Within"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
45 total reviews
Comment from rouskin
Almost impossible task to kill the beast within and to stay alive For now we only managed to survive and unfortunately sometimes with his help ...Blessings,Rouskin
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Almost impossible task to kill the beast within and to stay alive For now we only managed to survive and unfortunately sometimes with his help ...Blessings,Rouskin
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Yes, you're right, rouskin. A little beast lurks inside of each & every one of us, I think, whether we'd like to believe so or not.
Thanks for your kind comments and review.
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you'd better believe it
Comment from Angel Blessings
Ok now this one is scary with the presentation! I am sitting up reviewing, all by myself downstairs, and this pops up, with music and all. creepy, but I loved it! easy reading, and the audio that accompanies it is awesome! great job! Angel Blessings
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Ok now this one is scary with the presentation! I am sitting up reviewing, all by myself downstairs, and this pops up, with music and all. creepy, but I loved it! easy reading, and the audio that accompanies it is awesome! great job! Angel Blessings
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
Comment from alexgeorge
I just love the title to this one, Dean,
As always, your pictapoems are to Die for. This one has a grim message that can be applied the world over. Sinister forces lurk in the sidelines, pushing us towards fulfilling hollow dreams, slaves to their way of thinking so they can acgieve global domination.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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I just love the title to this one, Dean,
As always, your pictapoems are to Die for. This one has a grim message that can be applied the world over. Sinister forces lurk in the sidelines, pushing us towards fulfilling hollow dreams, slaves to their way of thinking so they can acgieve global domination.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Alex, that was precisely the point I was attempting to convey. I really appreciate the awesome review, my friend!
Comment from Mastery
Nothing to forgive, Dean and I wouldn't even mention it, were I you. This is well written and much can be extracted from its meaning. You have the gift and the knack for creating interesting writes, Dean. Wish I had six for you. Bob
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Nothing to forgive, Dean and I wouldn't even mention it, were I you. This is well written and much can be extracted from its meaning. You have the gift and the knack for creating interesting writes, Dean. Wish I had six for you. Bob
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Your kind comments and the fact that you read it is reward enough for me,Bob. I appreciate the analysis and review.
Comment from Darkhorse555
rally loved how you drew this especially implanted deeply in the souls soil very unique very beautifully crafted piece dear friend
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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rally loved how you drew this especially implanted deeply in the souls soil very unique very beautifully crafted piece dear friend
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thanks, O' Dark Fiend! I am really happy you liked this!
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very thought provoking poem. The first stanza opens this poem very strong. Lines like, "yearning malice, it only needs a seed" should make all of us look at ourselves. Very vivid images. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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This was a very thought provoking poem. The first stanza opens this poem very strong. Lines like, "yearning malice, it only needs a seed" should make all of us look at ourselves. Very vivid images. Nicely written.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me on it. I appreciate your kind review and am very happy that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good poem perfectly displayed, which is what I always expect from you. I found your first stanza a bit strong and I did not agree with you - but I have to say it is well written. I did agree with your third stanza and it is written in a more realistic way, particularly your last line in this stanza - 'lusts for power will never be sated'. A good read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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A good poem perfectly displayed, which is what I always expect from you. I found your first stanza a bit strong and I did not agree with you - but I have to say it is well written. I did agree with your third stanza and it is written in a more realistic way, particularly your last line in this stanza - 'lusts for power will never be sated'. A good read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks for giving me your thoughts and opinions about the poem, Dorothy. I really appreciate that.
Comment from c_lucas
When the country leaders forsake God's leadership, our country has steadily fallen. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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When the country leaders forsake God's leadership, our country has steadily fallen. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks, Charlie. Much obliged!
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You're welcome, Dean. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very wwell written, dean, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the values we should maintain though the world is moving in the other direction
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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this is very wwell written, dean, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the values we should maintain though the world is moving in the other direction
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, sweetwoodjax. I appreciate that.
Comment from lindalcreel
So many of us agree with what you have said so eloquently in this poem. I do believe we may be headed for a civil war. Americans want to be Americans, and the country has definitely taken a wrong turn somewhere along the line. Thanks so much for sharing. Big thumbs up!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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So many of us agree with what you have said so eloquently in this poem. I do believe we may be headed for a civil war. Americans want to be Americans, and the country has definitely taken a wrong turn somewhere along the line. Thanks so much for sharing. Big thumbs up!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you for reading and commenting on it, Linda. I'm most grateful.
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Always a pleasure:)