Counting Stars
What you should never do26 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
This is perfect, indeed forget about the ratings, just read and enjoy your writing...I agree with the theme keep on writing if it's what you really want, don't become discouraged by the stars and reviews...Thanks for sharing...I love it!
Good Luck.
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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This is perfect, indeed forget about the ratings, just read and enjoy your writing...I agree with the theme keep on writing if it's what you really want, don't become discouraged by the stars and reviews...Thanks for sharing...I love it!
Good Luck.
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much, Victoria.
You're very welcome, it was my pleasure!
Comment from maggieadams
Provocative last line and then coupled with the author notes. So, what did I do, I wrote a review to you. Good luck in the contest. Guess I will have to see what the dark skies bring.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Provocative last line and then coupled with the author notes. So, what did I do, I wrote a review to you. Good luck in the contest. Guess I will have to see what the dark skies bring.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from kiwisteveh
It's my observation that contest entries that look inwards to the FanStory process often win - so congratulations in advance!
Strong positive message here and you have dealt with the fun aspect with that last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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It's my observation that contest entries that look inwards to the FanStory process often win - so congratulations in advance!
Strong positive message here and you have dealt with the fun aspect with that last line.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Steve.
Comment from in777wr#
This was a good, humorous poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Good encouragement to keep writing, and not to count stars. Very nice poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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This was a good, humorous poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Good encouragement to keep writing, and not to count stars. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from w.j.debi
I love this! Sage advice to take to heart--all three lines. Excellent formatting and choice of artwork to compliment your words.
Never stop writing
Never give up on your dreams
Never count red stars
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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I love this! Sage advice to take to heart--all three lines. Excellent formatting and choice of artwork to compliment your words.
Never stop writing
Never give up on your dreams
Never count red stars
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from nancyjam
Good advice here in your clever 5-7-5 poem.
A great message about persevering and not
worrying about the judgement of others.
Just keep working at perfecting your craft.
Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Good advice here in your clever 5-7-5 poem.
A great message about persevering and not
worrying about the judgement of others.
Just keep working at perfecting your craft.
Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
Excellent encouragement for all members to read...it's what we feel, how we interrupt life's journey, we express for others to enjoy as in a game its not who wins but the fact you enjoyed it and played it well. Terrie
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Excellent encouragement for all members to read...it's what we feel, how we interrupt life's journey, we express for others to enjoy as in a game its not who wins but the fact you enjoyed it and played it well. Terrie
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from DonandVicki
Good contest entry, The allusion to the review stars on fan story is quite original. Good art work to enhance your poem. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Good contest entry, The allusion to the review stars on fan story is quite original. Good art work to enhance your poem. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are clear and creative.
The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. The reader pondered on this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are clear and creative.
The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. The reader pondered on this poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Now I'm going to have to go outside tonite and count all the red stars! Come to think of it, that's a bad idea. It's -40 with the wind chill. LOL But I promise not to give up on the first two so easily. This is a cute, fun little poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Now I'm going to have to go outside tonite and count all the red stars! Come to think of it, that's a bad idea. It's -40 with the wind chill. LOL But I promise not to give up on the first two so easily. This is a cute, fun little poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Cindy. Please do go out in the cold. I hope you did get the last line. It has thrown a few members and I am thinking of changing it, to make it easier.