The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Power walk"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh, yep, I'd have to agree, one-hundred percent!
The ways in which we carry ourselves tells a great deal about our character. However, what you see isn't always what you get.
Whatever you do, do it with vigor and pride. If you can do that, then I believe that no obstacles can stand in your way.
Nicely done, and best of luck to you in the prompt...
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Heh-heh, yep, I'd have to agree, one-hundred percent!
The ways in which we carry ourselves tells a great deal about our character. However, what you see isn't always what you get.
Whatever you do, do it with vigor and pride. If you can do that, then I believe that no obstacles can stand in your way.
Nicely done, and best of luck to you in the prompt...
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thanks Dean Kuch, I appreciate your positive affirmation of this entry . So happy you liked it,
Comment from evrenios
Whew! I can't believe what you have managed to do in a very few words: know what you want in life and go for it, whether you do it on your own or you do it in conjunction with others. I really enjoyed this beautiful work that managed to say something deep and metaphorical and yet rhyme three out of eight words. Well done, my friend.
Elizabeth
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Whew! I can't believe what you have managed to do in a very few words: know what you want in life and go for it, whether you do it on your own or you do it in conjunction with others. I really enjoyed this beautiful work that managed to say something deep and metaphorical and yet rhyme three out of eight words. Well done, my friend.
Elizabeth
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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What a wonderful review, thanks
Comment from seaglass
I have been reviewing these 1-6-1 poems all evening. They are fun. This one appeals to me because I like the rhyme and the message. Walk with head up, shoulders back, unashamed.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I have been reviewing these 1-6-1 poems all evening. They are fun. This one appeals to me because I like the rhyme and the message. Walk with head up, shoulders back, unashamed.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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I am glad you like Power walk
Comment from rouskin
Stride If you can't walk with pride Ride Very clever You are my favorite and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck and be blessed
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Stride If you can't walk with pride Ride Very clever You are my favorite and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck and be blessed
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written 1-6-1 which meets the criteria of the contest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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A very well written 1-6-1 which meets the criteria of the contest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
thanks, glad you liked it
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You're welcome.
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the image that you create with so few words, a good contest entry and the photo you chose to adorn your work is perfect. Don
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I like the image that you create with so few words, a good contest entry and the photo you chose to adorn your work is perfect. Don
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thanks Don for the wonderful review.