thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "No Competition"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the way God protects those who call on Him. a couple of errors==Which only came out instead of Witch only came out. I signed the papers instead of singed the papers. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the way God protects those who call on Him. a couple of errors==Which only came out instead of Witch only came out. I signed the papers instead of singed the papers. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Thanks
Comment from boxergirl
Good job portraying love that has gone wrong. Spousal abuse is a terrible wrong and takes a lot of courage for a woman to walk away. I liked the rhyme scheme and the poem structure too. Good job and Good Luck!
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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Good job portraying love that has gone wrong. Spousal abuse is a terrible wrong and takes a lot of courage for a woman to walk away. I liked the rhyme scheme and the poem structure too. Good job and Good Luck!
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
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THANKS