Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

It seems that our poet is governed by profound feelings and probably can instinctively discern feelings from sentiments; the feelings evoked by our thoughts. Mind you, the great poet Schiller once wrote" we must learnt to think by feeling and feel by thinking. I would like to wish you a life of eternal love even if it means suffering the discomfort of becoming beachcombers but I don't really believe that human love is infinite. Like life it changes and is transformed. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013

Thanks for the review and comments on profound feelings. By the way I love 'beachcombing'. :-) You are so right, life and love changes and in the process can transform us as well.

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

Well done for writing a lovely poem and not using the love words, I liked it a lot and the artwork was perfect, keep them coming....

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013

Thanks, Lorijean, I am so happy you liked the poem, it was a challenge!