Squash
Two quatrains with rhyme20 total reviews
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Ine. Seems so nice to me. I think it's great to vent your frustration. I never was so great in team sport. I was to little. So handball and basketball was nothing for me.....
I loved this poem good flow and rhyme and a nice subject too..
Well done . Liefs Fia
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
Hi Ine. Seems so nice to me. I think it's great to vent your frustration. I never was so great in team sport. I was to little. So handball and basketball was nothing for me.....
I loved this poem good flow and rhyme and a nice subject too..
Well done . Liefs Fia
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Thought I had to do a sport poem too.
Comment from poetstar
What a cute picture. I am glad I read your poem. Now I have learned about squash. Is it real fun to play? I imagine so.
Thanks for sharing your time and talents. You find such interesting and unique things to write about. Vonnie
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
What a cute picture. I am glad I read your poem. Now I have learned about squash. Is it real fun to play? I imagine so.
Thanks for sharing your time and talents. You find such interesting and unique things to write about. Vonnie
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes it is and quite intense. But I don't think I will ever be able to play it again-just a dream.
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A good dream. Vonnie
Comment from Janie King
I've never played squash, not real sure what it is..may be something like what we call racketball..good poem....God bless.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
I've never played squash, not real sure what it is..may be something like what we call racketball..good poem....God bless.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Slightly.
Comment from percival86jack
Got a kick out of the last line! LOL I'm afraid my days of strenuous activities like squash are long over! Great big hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
Got a kick out of the last line! LOL I'm afraid my days of strenuous activities like squash are long over! Great big hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Mine too, wished they were not.
Comment from anydamaru
Good. I liked this, a bit simple it may be, but I know for myself how important can sport be in ones physical as well as mental life). Alex
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
Good. I liked this, a bit simple it may be, but I know for myself how important can sport be in ones physical as well as mental life). Alex
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes, spot on.
Comment from TammyGail
squash I've never heard of it robina
though with your imagery it looks like
maybe its like tennis, great little jot
it was a pleasure to read and review..
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
squash I've never heard of it robina
though with your imagery it looks like
maybe its like tennis, great little jot
it was a pleasure to read and review..
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. It is far faster than tennis and in a closed space, but it is a racket sport.
Comment from guinea
Good writing I thought. It flows nicely. And It's to the point. I have not played squash, So I don't know about the game. I"m sure it is good exercise though.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
Good writing I thought. It flows nicely. And It's to the point. I have not played squash, So I don't know about the game. I"m sure it is good exercise though.
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes excellent, gets you tired in half an hour.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
This is a cute poem of remembering your passion for squash, Ine.
I never played, but I can imagine, as you say, it being a great 'regulator for anger'.
Best wishes, earl
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
This is a cute poem of remembering your passion for squash, Ine.
I never played, but I can imagine, as you say, it being a great 'regulator for anger'.
Best wishes, earl
Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
Comment from c_lucas
Active sports are beyond my ability. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2012
Active sports are beyond my ability. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
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Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine
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You're welcome, Robina. Charlie
Comment from judiverse
I don't know that much about squash, but it's great to find a sport that brings enjoyment. Playing must be a great way to release tension. It's sad to think of those things you used to enjoy, and then age and health issues begin to catch up with you. Excellent rhyme in this, and you convey your feeing about the sport. j
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reply by the author on 22-May-2012
I don't know that much about squash, but it's great to find a sport that brings enjoyment. Playing must be a great way to release tension. It's sad to think of those things you used to enjoy, and then age and health issues begin to catch up with you. Excellent rhyme in this, and you convey your feeing about the sport. j
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Comment Written 22-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks for your time and lovely review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. I don't think I will be able to play it again and I miss it.
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You're welcome. judi