Dream Searcher
A child learning in her sleep28 total reviews
Comment from percival86jack
What a clever presentation my friend! The picture is priceless and your great little story poem explores the thoughts and dreams she may be having... kudos! Hugs, Jack xxxxx
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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What a clever presentation my friend! The picture is priceless and your great little story poem explores the thoughts and dreams she may be having... kudos! Hugs, Jack xxxxx
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you Jack! I love that pic. Isn't She precious?
Nancy xxxx
Comment from Melspoems
I love this poem to say to a small child before the go to sleep.
Such beautiful imagery of things they can dream about or that they may see tomorrow.
Nice smooth flow and nice rhymes too.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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I love this poem to say to a small child before the go to sleep.
Such beautiful imagery of things they can dream about or that they may see tomorrow.
Nice smooth flow and nice rhymes too.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thanks Mel, That little girl was my inspiration! Nancy
Comment from stephybs
Like it? I love it! This is a beautiful piece and yes the art work would inspire most it is stunning! But your well written and beautifully thought up piece is Excellent! Stephanie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Like it? I love it! This is a beautiful piece and yes the art work would inspire most it is stunning! But your well written and beautifully thought up piece is Excellent! Stephanie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thanks Stephanie, That little girl is a darling! Nancy
Comment from oNray
I do like this poem. I can see any child fitting in so well to the inquisitive nature. You have walked us through this so well and even made a old boy feel your concerns and guidance
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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I do like this poem. I can see any child fitting in so well to the inquisitive nature. You have walked us through this so well and even made a old boy feel your concerns and guidance
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the reviewand the wonderful six oNray! I love the pic.and had to write about it. Nancy
Comment from amada
This is a very beautiful poem ; I like the imagery the most, fresh and very creative words, for example "A vine that to a trellis clings, A butterfly with gauzy wings..."
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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This is a very beautiful poem ; I like the imagery the most, fresh and very creative words, for example "A vine that to a trellis clings, A butterfly with gauzy wings..."
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the review and kind words amada. Nancy
Comment from artemis53
Beautiful soft words for a child and a lovely picture. Your colors are elegant and lend well to this most enchanting story for children or adults
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Beautiful soft words for a child and a lovely picture. Your colors are elegant and lend well to this most enchanting story for children or adults
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you Diane. I just love that picture of the little girl wondering what is behind that door. Nancy
Comment from writingdream7
I love this.... It is simple and beautiful... You did a fantastic job writing this and it was a joy to read....,. Thank you for writing and sharing your talent......................
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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I love this.... It is simple and beautiful... You did a fantastic job writing this and it was a joy to read....,. Thank you for writing and sharing your talent......................
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the review. I appreciate it very much. Nancy
Comment from LilHippie
So beautiful! Written for the most important people on earth, children. Love all of the beautiful little lines about the wonder and innocence of childhood, our desire to protect and educate them, making sure they enjoy the wonders of nature also. Very lovely. The artwork is beautiful and I understand how it was the inspiration for this lovely poem. Very nicely written.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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So beautiful! Written for the most important people on earth, children. Love all of the beautiful little lines about the wonder and innocence of childhood, our desire to protect and educate them, making sure they enjoy the wonders of nature also. Very lovely. The artwork is beautiful and I understand how it was the inspiration for this lovely poem. Very nicely written.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you LIL!I couldn't help it when I saw thwe pic.I just had to write something.Nancy
Comment from mommerry
I not only love the picture, I love the poem it inspired. What lovely thoughts you have woven into your poem with a rhythm that sings and perfect rhymes. I may not be an expert in judging poetry, but I thought this was excellent and so I rated it that way.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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I not only love the picture, I love the poem it inspired. What lovely thoughts you have woven into your poem with a rhythm that sings and perfect rhymes. I may not be an expert in judging poetry, but I thought this was excellent and so I rated it that way.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the six! That really makes me happy!
I just love the pic. Isn't she precious. Brings out the Grandma in me. LOL Nancy
Comment from Gungalo
Ahhhh Honeycomb, this is priceless in my estimation. A gorgeous pic and oh such words. Wonderful. I really love this write.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Ahhhh Honeycomb, this is priceless in my estimation. A gorgeous pic and oh such words. Wonderful. I really love this write.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Pam, Thank you so much for the review and the encouragement, Nancy
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