Weeding my Life
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Comment from Krugerrand
A poem that shows great strength of character and even greater personal growth.
I liked that you chose to just rhyme the last line of each.
Thanks so much for sharing this message in your poem.
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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A poem that shows great strength of character and even greater personal growth.
I liked that you chose to just rhyme the last line of each.
Thanks so much for sharing this message in your poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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I am so glad you liked my poem. Thank you for your kind comments in this review, I really appreciate it.
Love
Pupa
Comment from WRITER1
Sometimes you just can't get out of a rut. This brings you totally down. I have had my share of these days. A very good piece that explains how we all get.
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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Sometimes you just can't get out of a rut. This brings you totally down. I have had my share of these days. A very good piece that explains how we all get.
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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Thank you so much for your time to review my poem.
Love
Pupa
Comment from koyoga
Amazing description of "bootstrapping," ~ pulling
yourself up out of the darkness by the good parts!
Very lovely writing, great rhyme and flow.
I loved this piece. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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Amazing description of "bootstrapping," ~ pulling
yourself up out of the darkness by the good parts!
Very lovely writing, great rhyme and flow.
I loved this piece. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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Thanks for your enthusiasm in this most encouraging review, I really appreciate it and am so glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Just2Write
I liked the way you rhymed only the last line of each stanza. I wonder if the form has a name, as I read another poem this morning by an author who chose to do the same. Hers was 4 lines per stanza. I like your use of three lines better, as it keeps the rhyming words closer together. The poem reads extremely well, Pupa. There is much wisdom in the words and an understanding of circumstance that is rarely seen. Good perspectives and a most well crafted poem. Rose.
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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I liked the way you rhymed only the last line of each stanza. I wonder if the form has a name, as I read another poem this morning by an author who chose to do the same. Hers was 4 lines per stanza. I like your use of three lines better, as it keeps the rhyming words closer together. The poem reads extremely well, Pupa. There is much wisdom in the words and an understanding of circumstance that is rarely seen. Good perspectives and a most well crafted poem. Rose.
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks Rose. If this way of rhyming has a name, then I don't know it! I just thought of it while writing, jus to try something new.
Glad you liked it.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Dall
And when all else fails.. LET GO LET GOD.. i liked this, this is the way you feel sometimes when life just tears you apart. This was good, said so much about stress, well done!
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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And when all else fails.. LET GO LET GOD.. i liked this, this is the way you feel sometimes when life just tears you apart. This was good, said so much about stress, well done!
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks Dall, I appreciate your encouraging comments, glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa
Comment from fionageorge
This is a very interesting topic and a wonderful way you have presented this poem. The abc dec fgc rhyme interesting, and it works. The poem flows freely, has good rhythm, and gives the reader food for thought.
Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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This is a very interesting topic and a wonderful way you have presented this poem. The abc dec fgc rhyme interesting, and it works. The poem flows freely, has good rhythm, and gives the reader food for thought.
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Marijke, thank you so much for your detailed and kind comments on my work. I am glad you liked it, also the rhyme.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poetfriend Pupa and a very good Monday morning to you. I enjoyed your poem and the message of the struggle and victory you will gain in the end.
I hope you have a wonderful week, Loyd
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Hello poetfriend Pupa and a very good Monday morning to you. I enjoyed your poem and the message of the struggle and victory you will gain in the end.
I hope you have a wonderful week, Loyd
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks Loyd, I am so glad you enjoyed my poem and appreciate your kind comments.
Love
Pupa
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Good morning and you are very welcome, Loyd
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
I don't know what the artwork looks like, it never came up. The poem did and I enjoyed reading this piece. It gives one hope for the future. Just taking a good look at oneself and ridding your life of unwanted distractions, can put you on the right road.....very well done........jim
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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I don't know what the artwork looks like, it never came up. The poem did and I enjoyed reading this piece. It gives one hope for the future. Just taking a good look at oneself and ridding your life of unwanted distractions, can put you on the right road.....very well done........jim
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks jim, I appreciate your encouraging comments.Sorry about the artwork, you are the only one who couldn't see it.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Artasylum
this one hit me hard it is so understated as to the difficulties we are confronted with and we shrug our shoulders and say "that's life" when we really want to fall to the ground kicking our feet and pound our fists. But you are right a lightness will eventually prevail...love, di
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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this one hit me hard it is so understated as to the difficulties we are confronted with and we shrug our shoulders and say "that's life" when we really want to fall to the ground kicking our feet and pound our fists. But you are right a lightness will eventually prevail...love, di
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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I am glad you liked my poem, Diana seems we are in the same mood right now. Thanks for your kind review.
Love
Pupa
Comment from honeytree
Very telling art work and words written. When we come depressed within our lives, this can be hard to get rid of.
Music and relaxation excercises can be very helpful.
We all have our ups and downs within our lives, otherwise we wouldn't be human.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Very telling art work and words written. When we come depressed within our lives, this can be hard to get rid of.
Music and relaxation excercises can be very helpful.
We all have our ups and downs within our lives, otherwise we wouldn't be human.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks dear friend, I appreciate your kind and supportive comments in this review, also for your suggestions, you are so right.
Love
Pupa
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I think every human being has their ups and downs otherwise we wouldn't be human.
Honeytree.