Blind Trust
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Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written chapter building up the suspense. It looks like Norman will have a new profession; dog meat. Very good job.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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This is a very well written chapter building up the suspense. It looks like Norman will have a new profession; dog meat. Very good job.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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Yep! Norman on toast! LOL, thanks so much Charlie, for the great review. I love your sense of humor!
Hugs,
Gayle
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You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie
Comment from Korton
Another excellent chapter, Gayle. On the surface, this sounds great, however, the fly in the ointment is that none of them realize that Norman/Nathan has been to the restaurant and might possibly recognize Terry or Ella either one. If this doesn't work, the question is What next? Very well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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Another excellent chapter, Gayle. On the surface, this sounds great, however, the fly in the ointment is that none of them realize that Norman/Nathan has been to the restaurant and might possibly recognize Terry or Ella either one. If this doesn't work, the question is What next? Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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Hey Frank,
Yep, that's true, but he doesn't recognize them just yet, but he will...later. We're only half done with this book, so there is more to be revealed.
You tickle me pink, my friend!
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment from jayesnb
I didnt find this one slow at all...
I liked the way you built up the tension with the dialogue and prepared the reader for what is to come..
great job..
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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I didnt find this one slow at all...
I liked the way you built up the tension with the dialogue and prepared the reader for what is to come..
great job..
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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Hey Jaye,
Thanks for the great comments. I hope you like the next one as well!
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment from patmedium
Well, YOU might be apologising that it's a bit slow, but I certainly didn't feel any crawl to it. I was sitting forward in my seat, rooting for them all to get there in time. Pat.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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Well, YOU might be apologising that it's a bit slow, but I certainly didn't feel any crawl to it. I was sitting forward in my seat, rooting for them all to get there in time. Pat.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2010
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Pat, you're going to love the next one.
I don't think you've read any of the other books, so this will be a first read for you. I look forward with interest to see your next review!
Hugs,
Gayle
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I've only been around here for about six weeks, Gayle. Pat.