Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

This was wonderfully written. I was taken in and didn't notice the length. Poor Cathy. I bet she's scared to death. I can't imagine how she'll be able to help Rudy find her. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010

I think she's scared spitless, but I also think that we're going to see some of that spunk and determination. She might just fool Norman at his own game!

Hugs and thanks,
Gayle

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

[before he had time to much think] <-- umm.... huh???? now read these seven words out loud.... and then delete 'much' lol :-P

okay other than that little nit this was great!

must be nice to be rich too HA!

let's see what happens next....

thanx for sharing!
shelley :)




oooh i just won a free pumpy thingy and a banner supreme thingy! :)


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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010

Hey you! Good deal! I never win anything! Glad it went to you.

Yes, I got that out of there...left overs from another edit!

You're gonna love the next chapter!

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Hi Gayle. This chapter is very believable and held my attention from the start. It has very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2010

Hi Charlie,

Thanks so much for stopping by and for the fine review!

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by c_lucas on 17-Jan-2010

You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie