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A woman is stalked by a fan

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Comment from jayesnb
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Uh oh.. it looks like Norman is really gettin on a roll now..and he's showing his human side just a little.

I missed the last two chapters gonna have to check em out..

Another well written chapter... They said I love you to each other that brings things to a whole nother level now...

cant wait to see where ya take it.. great job.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
    Hey Jaye,

    Yes, we're about to take off, literally. Thanks for the great review and comments,

    Gayle
Comment from joelh605
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Wow - Seeing Norman crushed puts him in a (slightly) more human light; that's a nice touch, Gayle.

Joel
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we can eat out or in, depending what the weather is like. Actually, I like to do that tonight.

Earth calling Rudy, isn't your buddy with the bug sweeper is coming soon (ten or twenty minutes?) to a front door near you?

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
    LOL, I guess they're fast eaters. Actually, Jim and Tony are on the way. I guess I'll add something at the end about how they have to get back to the condo. Actually, that should have been Earth to Gayle! LOL!

    Thanks a bunch and I'll make that 'I'd like to do that,' as well.

    Hugs,
    Gayle
Comment from Mary's angel
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I liked the story line. The images are clear the further you get into the story. I was slightly confused at the beginning as to where they were and who they were but, nice ending. Makes you want to read more! Great use of descriptive words.

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
    Hi Mary,

    Now doubt you were confused ... chapter 20 and all, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy it.

    Thanks,
    Gayle
Comment from Xuders
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This chapter works well, establishing a romantic relationship between Cathy and Rudy, and underlining Norman's general creepiness. I can see that this writer knows how to build tension.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
    Hi Redux ... love that name!

    Thanks for stopping by and for the fine read and review. Hope to see you again

    Gayle
Comment from ZigzagMLT
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A very nice chapter. Wow. Your writing really keeps going along well, and I am curious to see where it will land.

One note: I'd like to do that tonight.

Thanks again, for another great read.
Zigzagmlt

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
    Hi Zig,

    Thanks for the great review and that catch. I'm on it! LOL! Norman is about to spin off I think. stay tuned!

    Hugs,
    Gayle
reply by ZigzagMLT on 13-Jan-2010
    Definitely. I wouldn't miss it. Z