Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Sounds like you are playing Cupid, again. Cathy and Rudy have a lot in common. I'm glad you have introduce Lenny and the gang. Great job of writing.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010

LOL! Charlie, let me congratulate you! You're the first to figure out what's next! It's gonna get good, I promise.

Thanks for the great review and your rating!

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by c_lucas on 02-Jan-2010

You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Great characters and you use dialogue to describe their personalities. The plot? I am not sure where you are going with this, yet. May just be me. Your descriptions were great for the setting.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010

Hi Barbara,

This is a mystery with romantic overtones that will shortly be revealed. I hope you get the chance to go back ... we've just started and maybe read along.

Again, thanks for the review,

Gayle

Comment from jl & bandit

Excellent

I havent read the other cahpters{sorry about that] but this was realy good it kept my intrest well and has good strong characters,I found this
himself is not amused./ im not sure this is proper
I didnt see any thing else. Good story.
JL&B

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010

Hi Jl, so nice to meet you. I'm Gayle.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and like the characters. Okay, regarding the 'himself', Chef is quite the drama queen and the girls often refer to him that way. It would only work in dialogue.

Thanks again and I hope to see you again soon,

Gayle

reply by jl & bandit on 02-Jan-2010

Hi Gayle,
its nice to meet you..
Oh, okay just like I said it didnt seem right, but that explains it LOL
JL

Comment from ZigzagMLT

Excellent

Wonderfully crafted. You had me on the edge of my seat. I love this story and am looking forward to finding its contiinuation in the queue.

Thanks so much for sharing your work!

Zigzagmlt

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010

Hi Zig,

Wow, that just makes my day. I'm so glad you stopped by and that the story is good for you. Hope you'll come back again soon!

Thanks,
Gayle

Comment from FredCollingwood

Excellent

Great story. It has a wonderful natural feel to it. One very minor thing you might lok at:

You're right(,) it's been ages > semi-colon or period.



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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010

Hi Fred,

Good catch. Yes, I'll get in there and make the correction. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story and I appreciate your fine review and rating.

Best
Gayle