A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from jmdg1954
Chapter moved along nicely. I guess Rebeka didn't like Tyler's suggestion to let Roger call Amber. Possible to begin this chapter with some word as to why she went ahead and did a Zoom call?
Its probably just me, but I found the humming part a bit childish.
"Let's pretend we (Elena and I) were still together, and I helped you, if - I found this confusing with the we, referring to Tyler and Rebeka.
Looking forward to the next post.
John
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Chapter moved along nicely. I guess Rebeka didn't like Tyler's suggestion to let Roger call Amber. Possible to begin this chapter with some word as to why she went ahead and did a Zoom call?
Its probably just me, but I found the humming part a bit childish.
"Let's pretend we (Elena and I) were still together, and I helped you, if - I found this confusing with the we, referring to Tyler and Rebeka.
Looking forward to the next post.
John
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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I made the correction. This post is part of a larger chapter and will make sense when the entire chapter is read together. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
This is a great part of chapter 2. I am rooting for them to get together and I hope they do. I have a feeling they will. Call it intuition or something like that.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Barbara,
This is a great part of chapter 2. I am rooting for them to get together and I hope they do. I have a feeling they will. Call it intuition or something like that.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. This is a romance novel. LOL
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You're welcome. I kind of figured it was. LOL
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My boys tease me because I watch the Hallmark Channel. They always comment about the couple will get together but remind them the fun part is how they work it out.
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I love the Hallmark channel. My boys don't get it. I use to read a lot of Harlequin romance when I was younger.
Comment from nomi338
Rebeka is going to have to get used to Tyler helping her and genuinely helping her. It is obvious that she has been deceived but it was not Tyler who deceived her, and she is going to have to learn to trust him. There is no other way.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Rebeka is going to have to get used to Tyler helping her and genuinely helping her. It is obvious that she has been deceived but it was not Tyler who deceived her, and she is going to have to learn to trust him. There is no other way.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Rebeka has trust issues. Thank you for the kind review.
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I certainly could not blame her in the face of the deception she has faced.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I thought sure Tyler was going to 'just coincidentally' have a speculum laying around.
Nicely written. Interesting - living her next novel.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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I thought sure Tyler was going to 'just coincidentally' have a speculum laying around.
Nicely written. Interesting - living her next novel.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Tyler is above board.
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I was just referring to a 'coincidence' factor, not anything to do with character. Too many coincidences are bothersome
Comment from Sankey
Such a lovely read and so comprehensive as to all the reasons for BS levels rising and so on. Are you familiar with the Libre system for blood sugar monitoring? I wear a disk in my arm, either left or right, for monitoring bloood sugar levels viamy phone and the doc can monitor it, locally as well. No spags.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Such a lovely read and so comprehensive as to all the reasons for BS levels rising and so on. Are you familiar with the Libre system for blood sugar monitoring? I wear a disk in my arm, either left or right, for monitoring bloood sugar levels viamy phone and the doc can monitor it, locally as well. No spags.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Rebeka isn't at that point, yet. Maybe later, maybe not. I had gestation diabetes while pregnant, but once the baby was born, no problems.
Comment from lyenochka
You always create the best men heroes for your novels. I'm afraid for all those single ladies reading your books that they'll be so disappointed in men around them. :)) I'm guessing there'll be two weddings at the end as Amber already likes Roger even before they met!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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You always create the best men heroes for your novels. I'm afraid for all those single ladies reading your books that they'll be so disappointed in men around them. :)) I'm guessing there'll be two weddings at the end as Amber already likes Roger even before they met!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. One never knows. True about the men, but it's fun dreaming.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud and I wish you the very best with your writing. I am also looking forward to reading your book. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your week. PatriciaA
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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This is a very well written chapter and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud and I wish you the very best with your writing. I am also looking forward to reading your book. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your week. PatriciaA
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate you.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"You too seem to get along well... " (change too to two - did I really just write 2 2 2, lol?)
Poor Rebekah is bleeding and I'm worried about her sitting on the couch and getting blood on it.
It's telling that they both believe Rebekah's father is a "threat."
Tyler's arms around her calms her, but it was make me even more tense being I didn't really know him, and it's dark, and there's no one else around. I think it's a bit of a leap that she seems to trust him as much as she does, but I also believe he's so different from her father and Richard that she feels she can trust him.
Have a great trip.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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"You too seem to get along well... " (change too to two - did I really just write 2 2 2, lol?)
Poor Rebekah is bleeding and I'm worried about her sitting on the couch and getting blood on it.
It's telling that they both believe Rebekah's father is a "threat."
Tyler's arms around her calms her, but it was make me even more tense being I didn't really know him, and it's dark, and there's no one else around. I think it's a bit of a leap that she seems to trust him as much as she does, but I also believe he's so different from her father and Richard that she feels she can trust him.
Have a great trip.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I can't believe I made that 'two' mistake. My brain in not fully functioning right now. LOL Thank you for the kind review. Plus, the people who's already reviewed didn't catch it.
Comment from lancellot
I saw no glaring errors, and the story is proceeding right along your normal course. The good doctor was there to 'help' Rebecka physically and emotionally. Too bad those darn roads still are clear.
I know you like to have your characters in a static place and bound together, but I think you will need a more plausible reason this time.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I saw no glaring errors, and the story is proceeding right along your normal course. The good doctor was there to 'help' Rebecka physically and emotionally. Too bad those darn roads still are clear.
I know you like to have your characters in a static place and bound together, but I think you will need a more plausible reason this time.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Give them couple of days and the roads will be clear. Here in Texas, they rarely clear the country roads, plus this time they need to repair the bridge. You're thinking of how fast they clear the roads in Illinois. Doesn't happen that way in Texas. They don't have snow ploughs. You may not believe me, but they don't. It rarely snows but does once in a while. Hasn't at all this year. I live on top of a hill, whenever it ices, they simply block off the hill and I don't go anywhere until it warms up enough to melt the ice. Usually only takes a few days.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice post, Barb. There are a lot of possibilities ahead. Rebeka's present situation might lead to complications with her pregnancy. Tyler will have to get more involved.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Very nice post, Barb. There are a lot of possibilities ahead. Rebeka's present situation might lead to complications with her pregnancy. Tyler will have to get more involved.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind understanding.
