Sister Bond
Love helps sisters connect.19 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
I have always envied those who have sisters - I love my brother, but it's not the same. The bond between two girls would be extra special. Your short poem highlights this beautifully.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
I have always envied those who have sisters - I love my brother, but it's not the same. The bond between two girls would be extra special. Your short poem highlights this beautifully.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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My sister and I are so close. Thank you for this great review.
Comment from Mintybee
This poem about sisterhood is sweet. I like how the lines run into each other, making each line connect. I also like the metaphor of love being oxygen to the soul. I think that is an apt description.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
This poem about sisterhood is sweet. I like how the lines run into each other, making each line connect. I also like the metaphor of love being oxygen to the soul. I think that is an apt description.
Mintybee
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from patcelaw
Since I have three daughters, it is always a delight to see them when they are together how strong their bond is to one another. They do not get together very often because they live in various far away places in the country, but when they are together. It is delightful to watch them. Your poem is very good and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the best in the contest as well. Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
Since I have three daughters, it is always a delight to see them when they are together how strong their bond is to one another. They do not get together very often because they live in various far away places in the country, but when they are together. It is delightful to watch them. Your poem is very good and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the best in the contest as well. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Hi Patricia, thank you for this great review. I'm glad your daughters are close. Brenda
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Your words allow us to embrace love in the arms of sisterhood.
To grow "connect" like best friends is amazing. Your words can be a greeting card. I like this lune poetry contest entry.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
Your words allow us to embrace love in the arms of sisterhood.
To grow "connect" like best friends is amazing. Your words can be a greeting card. I like this lune poetry contest entry.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Hi Darlene, thank you for this great review. Love, Brenda
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Brenda, it was a pleasure.
Comment from royowen
My two daughters are each other's best friends, though they live 2000 kms apart, when they meet it's like they never parted, an excellent lune poem Brenda, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
My two daughters are each other's best friends, though they live 2000 kms apart, when they meet it's like they never parted, an excellent lune poem Brenda, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Hi Roy, thank you for this very nice review.
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Welcome Brenda
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have always wanted to have this kind of relationship with my sisters but it was not to be, but I have a friend who I have known since I was 8 years old and she is like a sister to me. I enjoyed the innocence in this poem Brenda, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
I have always wanted to have this kind of relationship with my sisters but it was not to be, but I have a friend who I have known since I was 8 years old and she is like a sister to me. I enjoyed the innocence in this poem Brenda, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Hi Dolly, thank you for this great review. My sister is there for me in the good times and bad times. Love, Brenda
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This lune poem has the correct syllables and has an adorable presentation. Your well chosen words express a message of sisterly love. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
This lune poem has the correct syllables and has an adorable presentation. Your well chosen words express a message of sisterly love. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Hi Alex, thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from RJ Heritage
I like Lune poetry for its simplicity and strong themes. Short, but must be expressive in that limited format. Your expressed and connected the idea well. A pleasant and endearing poem.
RJ
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
I like Lune poetry for its simplicity and strong themes. Short, but must be expressive in that limited format. Your expressed and connected the idea well. A pleasant and endearing poem.
RJ
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Hi RJ, thank you for this great review. It is so cold here. I'd let to be in a warm place like where you live.
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My pleasure
RI
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Brenda,
This is a great lune poem. Yes, I believe love and oxygen does help sister's bond. I am really close with my youngest sister. We are two against the world.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
Brenda,
This is a great lune poem. Yes, I believe love and oxygen does help sister's bond. I am really close with my youngest sister. We are two against the world.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thank you Cecilia for this great review. That is how my sister and I are. Love, Brenda
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You're welcome my friend