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Forging Destiny

So much more than legacy . . .

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Yvette
This is a good lune on our physical and spiritual future. Truth is important to both. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Joan -- it feels good to be back! ;) Yvette
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
reply by dragonpoet on 29-Jan-2025
    You're welcome, Yvette. No apologies needed. Life often gets in the way. And it should take presidence.
    Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. This is lovely. We could really use some very loud beckoning of truth right now in our world. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Marilyn -- Always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from June Sargent
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That's the key word - truth. If our future is not based on truth, destiny may surprise us with an outcome we had not anticipated. Best to think before we make choices we may regret.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, June -- always good to hear from your here! ;) Yvette
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Ah, the lunne -- not an easy format to make sing, and yet it doesn't get more poetic than this! Lovely work, m'lady! Best of luck in the contest! (I'm so glad you're back!)

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Dawn -- like the new snapshot there! ;) Yvette
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from DonandVicki
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I think that one of my favorite, or better said interesting sayings in the Bible is when Pontious Pilate responds to Jesus"What is truth?" Truth will indeed set you free.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Sir -- always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from poetwatch
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Truth is a sign that the speaker may live forever, Yvette. :) The liar, cheat and all those that live for the moment and sin whenever and in whatever are all going you know were. This is a good entry for the Lune Poetry contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Sir -- missed hearing from you for a while there! ;) Hope all's well over there! ;) Yvette
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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When the truth is spoken ears prick up and listen as everyone wants to understand. I enjoyed your few words for the contest Yvette and wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx so much for your review on this one, Dolly -- always so good to see that smile!! ;)
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long week at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Yvette,

This Lune makes sense even to someone who is not overly religious. Of course, one may interpret this based on the current political situation. My hope is the MAGA-ites (and their rhetoric) will allow the truth be allowed to flourish.

Regardless of my opinion, many will favor your overall presentation and message.

Mark

Mark

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Yeah, no politics on the pen here, Mark -- I realize that some folks like to scream their political opinions, but that 'some folks' is not me. Thanx for the review, sir!
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long week at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Bill Schott
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This lune poem, Forging Destiny, has the proper formatting and allows that to seek truth is a heavenly venture that requires the vague and false to fall away.

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    Thanx for your review on this one, Bill!!
    [Apologize for the delay in response, been a long week at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]