Comment from
kiwisteveh
Better get used to it over the next four years if you live in the US!
You've nailed the Tyburn format with all syllables and rhymes in place and above all your words actually make sense and carry a potent message.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025