The Mount
A sermon by the Lord.30 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
And yet verbosity is often heard from pulpits wherever i go trying to make believe the person speaking has over-acheived.
It good to see you writing again. I haven't reviewed anything ofyours in a long while.
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And yet verbosity is often heard from pulpits wherever i go trying to make believe the person speaking has over-acheived.
It good to see you writing again. I haven't reviewed anything ofyours in a long while.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell a good story.
-A very good opening verse,
followed by a question the
disciple answers.
-You do a good job showing
the paths that Jesus took
teaching the people as he went.
-Very good closing lines that
Jesus can still be in our lives
if that is the path we choose.
-Very well done.
-Thanks for sharing everything.
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell a good story.
-A very good opening verse,
followed by a question the
disciple answers.
-You do a good job showing
the paths that Jesus took
teaching the people as he went.
-Very good closing lines that
Jesus can still be in our lives
if that is the path we choose.
-Very well done.
-Thanks for sharing everything.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from artisart4u
You are right, as we sing in church "take it to the Lord in prayer." It is wonderful how the Lord wanted to share what God can do for you.
Your picture, colors, and font are very nice.
Good luck with your poem.
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You are right, as we sing in church "take it to the Lord in prayer." It is wonderful how the Lord wanted to share what God can do for you.
Your picture, colors, and font are very nice.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from DonandVicki
I love these kinds of poems, that give the glory to God. I especially enjoyed this line," Talk to God whenever you can." I pray as much as I can during the day for His grace.
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I love these kinds of poems, that give the glory to God. I especially enjoyed this line," Talk to God whenever you can." I pray as much as I can during the day for His grace.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem of Jesus' sermon on the Mount. I treasure this passage and your inspired poem. Bless you, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in our Lord Jesus Christ.
Sally :))
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem of Jesus' sermon on the Mount. I treasure this passage and your inspired poem. Bless you, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in our Lord Jesus Christ.
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Thank you for sharing your delightful verse, clearly composed and inspired by your strong faith. I like the message woven through it that Jesus is our example and inspiration and we should speak freely to God to seek guidance from his Heavenly plan. Well done, Willie. Take care Debbie
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Thank you for sharing your delightful verse, clearly composed and inspired by your strong faith. I like the message woven through it that Jesus is our example and inspiration and we should speak freely to God to seek guidance from his Heavenly plan. Well done, Willie. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a wonderful poem of faith written in lovely rhythm and rhyme which makes it a joy to read it rolls off the tongue and of course an important message portrayed for all. Well done, great job.
Best Wishes
Nicki
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This is a wonderful poem of faith written in lovely rhythm and rhyme which makes it a joy to read it rolls off the tongue and of course an important message portrayed for all. Well done, great job.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie
Despite the differing rhyme schemes among the stanzas the poem flows well with all the miracles and preaching He did to teach his followers of that time and now. It includes a lot of his life.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
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Hi Willie
Despite the differing rhyme schemes among the stanzas the poem flows well with all the miracles and preaching He did to teach his followers of that time and now. It includes a lot of his life.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A much needed poem on prayer for these unprecedented days. Prayer works and there isn't some magical way of going about it. just talk to God like you would talk to anyone and He will understand the meaning in your heart. Very nice.
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A much needed poem on prayer for these unprecedented days. Prayer works and there isn't some magical way of going about it. just talk to God like you would talk to anyone and He will understand the meaning in your heart. Very nice.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from mermaids
I love your theme of talking to God. It comes through clearly in your words. Your faith based poem has a smooth flow and is a good poem to read out loud. "And God's people learned how to pray," is a wonderful life that impacts the reader.
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I love your theme of talking to God. It comes through clearly in your words. Your faith based poem has a smooth flow and is a good poem to read out loud. "And God's people learned how to pray," is a wonderful life that impacts the reader.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
