Look for the Sun
Dark times are defined as such by brighter ones . . .13 total reviews
Comment from Julie G1
Well written. This concise verse effectively expresses the poet's message of hope. The choice of language is appropriate for this concise genre. The reader is engaged in such inspiration, and wishes the poet good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Well written. This concise verse effectively expresses the poet's message of hope. The choice of language is appropriate for this concise genre. The reader is engaged in such inspiration, and wishes the poet good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life is full of sunshine and shadows and we must always remember to define it through the sunny days, rather than the rainy days, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Life is full of sunshine and shadows and we must always remember to define it through the sunny days, rather than the rainy days, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your great comments!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautiful! For me I thought your poem was a reminder that even in darker times, there's sunshine defining those moments. This is such a lovely thought to carry with me today - thank you for sharing it!
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Your poem is beautiful! For me I thought your poem was a reminder that even in darker times, there's sunshine defining those moments. This is such a lovely thought to carry with me today - thank you for sharing it!
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you for these great comments -- glad it helped with a positive thought for your day!
