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Singularity

Beyond our intelligence

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Comment from royowen
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I'm so glad you mentioned Eve, the reason they were tempted was that Eve was told sage could become as God, was told God lied, but there is a mechanism that tells us, no one is like unto God, but, like Satan, we are self deceived, pride is the enemy, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024

Comment from Neonewman
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Wow! This is a captivating insight into the future. Maybe not so far fetched, which makes this a little terrifying. Great job on this contest entry.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024

Comment from Nicki.B
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Wow what an interesting read you had me hooked right from the start it's all very fascinating and terrifying at the same time. I can't keep up woth technology now never mind in 20 years time. Excellent poem, well thought out and put together. Good luck with the contest
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024

Comment from jake cosmos aller
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I think you might be right. Within ten years we will reach the singularity stage where humans and AI powered robots will become common. the world will be then divided between the singularity human bots who will live forever and the vast majority of humans who will become slaves to their AI overlords.

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024